 KitaraStrife 2008-05-12 . chapter 6Hmm... Despite having a CRAPLOAD of errors like you said it would, I REALLY EFFING LOVED THIS FIC!! {tosses you chocolates} Though, I think that ending was a little crappy compared to the rest of it, I kinda saw it as a sorta "Pirates of the Caribbean" thing. You know how those movies go through the ENTIRE movie, then have the credits, then - for the people that are actually smart enough to stay in the theaters to wait for the lines getting out to die down - have a little scene at the end of 'em? Yeah. Those movies. Kinda like them. XD Anyways... LOVED IT! ;) |
 PetiteMizuChan 2008-04-05 . chapter 6I really enjoyed this story. *thumbs up* Thou I wanted to know what happened to Riku and his love feeling for sora. |
 LunarFlowerHymn 2007-10-09 . chapter 6I loved your story so much! Great job! ^^ Cloud reminded me of a stubborn child in parts, same with Leon but more so Cloud. xD But yeah, I loved it! Keep up the good work! |
 Lil' Miss Spookiness 2007-10-09 . chapter 6a bonus chapiter!
greatness
and leon witha ponytail!
*dies ina very fangirlish manner*
lol
aww poor riku havin ta say goodbye ta sora
forgot ta say twas cute how cloud was jealous of riku in da last chapiter
lol
cya |
 Lil' Miss Spookiness 2007-10-09 . chapter 5THANK U FER DA THANK U!
lol
man dis was so much fun!
hehe
cloud: u hav a house?!
leon: no i sleep in a cardboard box
cloud: reli?!
lol
had ta b done
hehe
u rawk
luv ya |
 Lil' Miss Spookiness 2007-10-08 . chapter 4yay clouds not dead!
aww wot a sweet chapiter!
fav quote wud b "Bastards. He wished for them to be alive, so he could kill them"
genius
how often do i wish things lyk dat wer reli alive
lyk dat damned hockey ball that killed my shin earlier
damned hockey
neway
plz update son!
lol |
 Lil' Miss Spookiness 2007-10-05 . chapter 3omg cloud cant die!
hawt yaoi!
"He mentality prepared himself for Cloud’s harassment"
wow, go leon!
plz update tres soon |
 Lil' Miss Spookiness 2007-10-05 . chapter 1"That man ran away like a frighten maid who was attacked by a lustful monster with the intention of deflowering her."
"He will achieve his goal to get that headstrong ice prince in his bed,"
wot?^
lol
greatness all da same |