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| jerrysaries328 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseI don't get it... why was she so out of it? Did she dump a chemical into the tub without realizing? |
| aranel25 2007-11-19 ch 1, | abuseWow! That was beautiful! |
| darklace15 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was amazingly well-written. Good pace, good plot, and I really liked how everything she did in the beginning reminded her of the little girl. Wow. Excellent job. |
| saragillie 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abuseAh... I love baths when they're that relaxing. You have a wonderfully descriptive writing style. |
| ladybrin 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abusethis was really excellent - thanks for writing and please write more hodgela |
| willowwood 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseWow that was really perfect. Love the imagery of it all and your characterisations were amazing. Loved it! and would love to read some more Hodgela from you. |
| kris932 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseIt was very touching. |
| EmmaBerlin 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseThis was the nicest Angela/Jack story I've read so far. I really liked it, very careful and thoughtful use of words! I'm waiting for more! |