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Reviews For: Big Kid Little kid Part 1

jada951
2008-03-30
ch 1,
abuseah!

ya can't leave johnny trapped at the bottom of the mine, can you?

and how about the bogus dad?

what comes next?

emergenccy fan minds want to know!
Sam Waterston Fan
2008-03-09
ch 1,
abuseThis story looks interesting..

Will you be updating this?
es48
2007-10-04
ch 1,
abuseGreat story so far. Your readers hope you won't keep us in suspense too long. Please post the rest of the story soon.
BradleyPen
2007-10-04
ch 1,
abuseHey nice start, was going to mention that it was Carson too lol. Added your story to my alert list.
Mamabella
2007-10-02
ch 1,
abuseI liked it, i is very good for you first attempt which is always nerve racking if you ask me lol

FYI its 'Carson' California not Carlton
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