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| jada951 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseah! ya can't leave johnny trapped at the bottom of the mine, can you? and how about the bogus dad? what comes next? emergenccy fan minds want to know! |
| Sam Waterston Fan 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseThis story looks interesting.. Will you be updating this? |
| es48 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseGreat story so far. Your readers hope you won't keep us in suspense too long. Please post the rest of the story soon. |
| BradleyPen 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseHey nice start, was going to mention that it was Carson too lol. Added your story to my alert list. |
| Mamabella 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseI liked it, i is very good for you first attempt which is always nerve racking if you ask me lol FYI its 'Carson' California not Carlton |