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| Hogaboom 2008-07-20 ch 14, | abusechris is going to tell piper and leo wgo he is |
| Hogaboom 2008-07-19 ch 9, | abuseplease write more stories like this . this one is just so gd and can't wait to read the next chapter. |
| Hogaboom 2008-07-19 ch 7, | abuseHey this is a really gd story in the previous chapter you really had me disliking leo and in this chapter I felt very very sorry for chris. |
| hermit hideaway 2008-06-25 ch 32, | abuseI love this story! It's full of lots of sappy goodness that makes me smile while reading it (Meanwhile my friend is looking at me like I'm crazy for grinning and laughing at the computer screen). I love that Leo got a second chance and that it turned out to be all of the elder's faults for him dismissing Chris. I loved the beginning of this story with the flashbacks in the chamber. Plus I love that even when Wyatt had given himself over in his grief, he still managed to trust his brother to give them a better future. Great story and god I hope you have another one for me to read. |
| eternallycharmed 2008-06-19 ch 32, | abuseHey, I just wanted to say that I loved your story. When I was reading the beginning parts where they decided not to tell Chris that they knew his secret, I was a little aprehesive. I read on anyway and, wow!, I'm glad I did. You're a great writer, I'm gonna go cheak out your ficlist now, see if you have any other awsome stories. Oh, and good luck with your book! :) |
| SlothKeeper 2008-06-17 ch 32, | abuseThat was difinately worth reading. For once, not a single mistake what so ever. You're a really talented writer. I loved the story so much. I felt like crying so much...and I felt like stabbing Gideon myself. Down with elders, those pombus hypocrites. The only thing they did right was letting Coop and Phoebe get married without and backlash. |
| Cirolane 2008-06-05 ch 32, | abuseI just spent the last two days reading this, and boy was it worth it. This was fantastic. Really it had all my favorite plot lines, and you did it so well. The CO seeing Chris' memories and Wyatt coming back in time, and Gideon getting his ass kicked, what more can a girl ask for? Really, you made me squee, laugh and cry. You write them all so well. Both evil and good Wyatt was convincing. I also thought you wrote Leo very well. Poor boys though, having so many set of memories... Time Travell is very confusing, but I think you explained it well. As well as anyone can... I was unsure at first if I was even gonna bother with reading this fic: I have to say that the summary does not convey how awesome this fic is. I'm glad I did bother though. And the use of the tribunial chamber was wonderfully original, I've never seen it done before. Most people just use a spell. I also liked that they started to like him before they knew he was family. That point in the show always bothered me. So you like him just because he's family? And if he wasn't then they never would? Hmmf. So all in all, a very well written fic. You did it very well. It's a great story. I loved it. I really enjoyed it=)=) |
| flaming skulls 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abusehi again. i didn't read this online, but on goldacharmed's print out copy of it. i loved it. and i just waited to let you know. see ya. |
| Sakurabound 2008-04-11 ch 32, | abuseThis was absolutely the BEST Charmed fanfic that I have ever read. Seriously, no joke. It was amazing. I swear-I cried a little, laughed, screamed, and was shocked a whole lot! I really love this fic!! You did a great job. Abbz |
| Mademoiselle Mystery 2008-04-06 ch 32, | abuseSimply magnificent. Thanks for the wonderful story! =) |
| missyme89 2008-03-17 ch 32, | abusethe best i've ever read:) |
| sbeatlesfanatic 2008-03-10 ch 7, | abuseThis is good so far. |
| Von 2008-03-10 ch 32, | abuseABsoLUTEly LOVED it! And the award for BEST REVELATION FIC goes to.. YOU! One little thing confused me - what's with all the 'can't heal a non-magical wound' thing? I remember - just off the top of my head - Leo healing Wyatt's cold or Piper's cut that happened when she sliced her hand open in the kitchen... Anyway. LOVELY stuff and I can't congratulate you enough on it! WELL DONE! *applauds* |
| Von 2008-03-10 ch 9, anon. | abuseI just gotta say this before I forget: Huge amazement, respect and admiration for managing this 'They find out about Chris' story without making it over the top or making it so it seems a) impossible for reconcilliation or b) like they only care about him because he's suddenly related. I loved how you had them understanding more about HIM as a person first, caring for him, first just as a child struggling to survive in the dark future, then as Wyatt's best friend, then one hurt by Wyatt, then a potential orphan they'd adopted until finally realising he was their son. And your charactisations are pretty spectacular too. When you write Leo and Phoebe, I SEE them. And Paige's line "Chris, you know all those little secrets you’ve been desperately trying to hide from us, don’t think a thing about it, hon. We saw it all while you were napping and it’s cool with us" I completely say her with her classic hand-wave-of-non-concern followed by the conspiratorial-wink. :D Spectacular job. I'm loving this so far and I hope I love the rest just as much! I love most of all how this seems to be a paced-out story, rather than the abrupt, disjointed ones of authors around you. :D |
| future author at work 2008-03-06 ch 32, | abusegreat story. |