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funkyhigh
2008-01-30 . chapter 3
lol, strange
Savage Shade
2007-10-22 . chapter 3
Hahaha, I couldn't stop laughing in some of this. Great work.
Savage Shade
2007-10-15 . chapter 1
Hahaha, glad to see you keep your word, after all you did say it'd be funny. Good start.
gretchless
2007-10-11 . chapter 3
yup, i think that is defo the weirdest brotherhood story i have ever read thats for sure !

it was funny like ... i liked the 2i should have never answered the phone' from john and the “Neurology. I work with brains. Why is it so hard to remember that I’m not a veterinarian?” hehe !

cant wait to see the dog that won ! but i do have a question ? if a new dog is coming into it wont to be on jim's farm ? who looks after jims farm when caleb, dean and sam are all hunting and mac is working ?

bye for now !
cavetrollgrl
2007-10-09 . chapter 3
Bobby's right quoting Old Yeller is low. The boys will never believe the triad and bobby now. Jeff getting the last word in was teriffic. a Mongoose flipping channels like a bored teenager. Please keep jewels like this coming.
WindStar
2007-10-09 . chapter 3
this made me laugh so much thanks!
sams1ra
2007-10-09 . chapter 3
Hee. *sniggers*
And hey, again with the no alerts. It's weird, you're the only one I'm not getting alerts from... *ponders*
Winchester73
2007-10-08 . chapter 3
I really enjoyed this story! I chuckled over the way the Triad was conned - Thanks for the ride!
Angelustatt
2007-10-08 . chapter 3
That was sheer brilliance! I haven't laughed so hard in ages, guys and I'm talking the tears in the eyes kind of laughing. Seeing the Triad beaten by a mongoose is the stuff of legend. LOL

Well done!!
TraSan
2007-10-08 . chapter 3
Ahahahahahahaha...I finally caught up tonight. :D

What a fun story. Sometimes it's just really good to laugh (even if it is at the Triad's expense).

Thanks to you both for writing!
Becomingwhaturmeantobe
2007-10-08 . chapter 3
That was great. Loved it! It's nice to see a funny story once in a while!
Ciya
2007-10-08 . chapter 3
Ha! A mongoose got the better of the Triad. LMAO.
Lita of Jupiter
2007-10-08 . chapter 3
Dude!
I love Jeff! he totally owned the Triad and still made them look
like fools a few years later! Maybe the consequences of dealing with Jeff's big eyes made John realize the importance of resisting Sam!s

Those men are so cute!
I will be looking forward to meeting Boo soon
LovinJackson
2007-10-08 . chapter 3
Hey girls

Thsi story was just hilarious. I loved every minute of it! Picturing the Triad getting outdone by a talking mongoose is just so damn funny. Especially when John and Mackland where trying to shut it up when Jim was at the door with his neighboor lol

Caleb, Dean and Sam's reactionbs to the whole story were priceless and i loved the comment about the Vampires :P

Seriously awesome!! :)

Tara x0x
Nana56
2007-10-08 . chapter 3
Perfect ending! They go through all that and then it won't talk with the boys there. I love it.

Thanks, girls.
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