| Reviews for Edward and the Kitten |
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mysinger 9/5/11 . chapter 1Cute story. |
ClumsyShopaholic 2/2/11 . chapter 1awwww cute story much? cant wait to read other stories that you wrote! |
paulineta 1/19/10 . chapter 1SO CUTE! I'm always wanted a cat, but now I crave it |
Awkward Ocelot 12/23/09 . chapter 1so cute! like a little fluff ball literaly |
nkshamma 10/14/09 . chapter 1Its so cute. You should continue it. |
smallskittlez 8/27/09 . chapter 1wow that waz a rly kute story i luv it! do u have ne more one-shotz or short storys? im kinda new 2 fan fic & waz just wonderin how 2 get 2 ur profile? |
hermoinelvsronald 7/10/09 . chapter 1hey luv the idea of your story what happens when the cullens get a pet but this story ended just too abruptly and could havae gone off in more different directions but that just my opinion it did make me lol so thanks keep up the good writing |
HeswamtoFrance 7/8/09 . chapter 1A very sweet concept. A unique and loving storyline. At times the writing did seem nearly military in structure. It didn't flow of feel natural, forced maybe. The characters were slightly out of character, which is perfectly fine just not expected. Your grammer and such is phenomenal now all you must do is add more passion and emotion. George |
RyRy2711 7/2/09 . chapter 1This is a very good story. I always wondered what would happen if Bella got a pet, though I admit that wasn't how I thought it would have played out. My only piece of advice would be to go back through and read it because, in a few places, you switched from a 3rd person point of view to A 1st person POV. other than that, great story. It's so nice to be able to read a story that is actually cohearent, and not so full of grammitcal errors. |
styling16 6/2/09 . chapter 1the cat makes me think of garfield :D |
Ivy O'Hara 4/11/09 . chapter 1That was very cute, I enjoyed reading it;) Ivy |
PandylBas 3/16/09 . chapter 1o kodak moment |
Leighta Greenleaf 2/25/09 . chapter 1Aw... *melts into a pool of mush* |
AliciaCullen1901 12/16/08 . chapter 1aw. soo sweet! |
shaid 12/8/08 . chapter 1that was really cute. Poor Rosalie, wanting to eat a kitten... Interesting idea, though, cats having rather human thoughts... Not much of a cat person myself, they're too independent. |