Its so cute. You should continue it.

wow that waz a rly kute story i luv it!
do u have ne more one-shotz or short storys?
im kinda new 2 fan fic & waz just wonderin how 2 get 2 ur profile?

hey
luv the idea of your story what happens when the cullens get a pet but this story ended just too abruptly and could havae gone off in more different directions
but that just my opinion
it did make me lol
so thanks
keep up the good writing

A very sweet concept. A unique and loving storyline. At times the writing did seem nearly military in structure. It didn't flow of feel natural, forced maybe. The characters were slightly out of character, which is perfectly fine just not expected. Your grammer and such is phenomenal now all you must do is add more passion and emotion.
George

This is a very good story. I always wondered what would happen if Bella got a pet, though I admit that wasn't how I thought it would have played out. My only piece of advice would be to go back through and read it because, in a few places, you switched from a 3rd person point of view to A 1st person POV. other than that, great story. It's so nice to be able to read a story that is actually cohearent, and not so full of grammitcal errors.

the cat makes me think of garfield :D

That was very cute, I enjoyed reading it;)

~Ivy~

o kodak moment

Aw... *melts into a pool of mush*

aw. soo sweet!

that was really cute. Poor Rosalie, wanting to eat a kitten... Interesting idea, though, cats having rather human thoughts... Not much of a cat person myself, they're too independent.

Aw, i love it.! you are a very good writer...well maybe that's because your an English teacher. While reading this story you had alot of words that i had to look up :D

but i love it.

as always.. awesome work

this was too funny!

That was fun.