 Missy 2009-09-27 . chapter 1 I loved this,it was soo cute!!I also think that if you haven't put it in the Misa/L community,you definiatly should put it there.It was very good,and they were very much in character. |
 Zeek 2008-07-19 . chapter 2 three words mate L owns all |
 x-Bayley-x 2008-03-08 . chapter 2Cool story, |
 Hakumei.xo 2008-02-12 . chapter 1 That was cute (in a sort of twisted way...)!
I didn't think it was crude at all (I don't really suggest it for a guy to read though). I like L being so innocently clueless!
"Are you bleeding from the **?"
LMAO. |
 Nookie 2008-02-04 . chapter 2 iz ur adultfnafiction down? |
 Dead Pulse 2007-12-22 . chapter 2I rather like your story, I didnt find it crude in any way! Lol good job :D |
 Perdendosi 2007-12-01 . chapter 1This was HILARIOUS.
I LOVED it.
"Are you bleeding from the **?"
o_o HILARIOUS. |
 Anita Tseu 2007-11-09 . chapter 1Hahaha lol very cute. Except cramps DO suck as hell...lol. |
 misa-chan 2007-10-05 . chapter 1 At last! I've found another rare L/Misa gem amongst all the yaoi/shounen-ai stuff in DN! AND it's a fresh, original plot without OOCness and glaring errors. My happiness for the day is complete. Oh, and I gotta say, I found the summary rather amusing than crude. But I'm weird that way. ^__^; Well, I look forward to any other L/M fics you think up next. Ciao! |
 shutupandsing 2007-10-04 . chapter 2Period cramps suck **! I think I've become addicted to pain medicine because of it.
Thanks for writing such a true and life-like fic |
 Bishieluver01 2007-10-03 . chapter 2*cheers* Yeah! You tell those peeps MTHR! XD Still a great fic; reread it like you sai and I appreciated the spelling errors being gone. :) |
 Subai-chan 2007-10-03 . chapter 1Stupid reviewer. The second. Y'know, the summary is what hooked me into reading this! I love L's opening line to Misa when he realizes what's wrong...it definitely is like him. This whole scenario played out in my head as I was reading it...Misa just staring at L as he just stares back innocently, like he hasn't done anything wrong...because in his mind, he sure hasn't. He's a little bit...off when it comes to social skills. It's all that sugar and not enough sleep in his system, I swear!
I like LxMisa fluff, so by all means, feel free to write more fics on this stuff! For some odd reason, my L-obsessed friend wants to smack me for reading this...hm. Good work, onna! Ciao!
~Axel's Official Stalker |
 Nubial Sheep 2007-10-02 . chapter 1Just a friendly tip; Starting your story summary with the words "are you bleeding from the **?" is NOT the best way to attract readers. It's just gross. And L would not, no matter how much of a social recluse he is, ask Misa that. He's not socially challenged, and he's intelligent enough to know the polite way to ask. Maybe, "Are you going through your menstrual cycle, Misa-chan?" would be more realistic and in character. |
 Bishieluver01 2007-10-02 . chapter 1The summery was... slightly disturbing but made me curious enough to check out this piece. Short and sweet at the end, despite the bitterness of the tea. I loved the sentance at the end, and found that image of a slightly blushing Ryuuzaki giving Misa a kiss on the forhead just sweet... I really hope you could make another LxMisa soon, Sayonara! |