Cool chappy, but I'm still trying to figure out what the heck kind of race he is. I'm beginning to think he's a Khajiit, what with the name, and a couple of times you hinted that his ears were flicking, which of course only a cat can do. I do hope that you update before christmas!! And this is an awesome Oblivion fic so far. I like werewolf fics for this game, and this is the coolest one I've found!


MERRY CHRISTMAS! xD

nice. I like his reactionat the end when he realizes what he has become. Itstead of giving in to despair, he decides to be proactive and do something about his lycanthropy (werewolfisim, for those who don't know! XD) Anyway, good job!

Hm, nice chapter. I liked the buildup to the werewolf attack, but maybe you waited a little too long into the chapter? anyway, keep em coming! ^.^

Hi there, ZombieDragon!

First off, thank you for writing such a wonderful story! I'm a werewolf-junkie, so I was glad that someone took the idea about werewolves in Oblivion further. Especially since we got the amazing mod "Curse of Hircine" from Cid89 and the others.

I love the way you write! You keep a wonderful pace thorough the story - not too fast, not too slow either. Simply great. Second, I love how your character is off to the forest to rid Tamriel of its new plague. You really intrigue the reader - very exciting!

Please keep updating this, I'd love to see what happens to your unfortunate character next.

Don't have much to say, just letting you know I'm still an interested reader XD.

This seems like a good start, I like your description of the Blade, it sounded very special and the first person perspective seemed very realistic. You used a few cliche phrases-they sometimes annoy me but most people use them so it is nothing to worry about. 'Trusty black steed' makes him sound like a knight off on adventure, but I can'thelp but think of Shrek... I hope you continue-I like the creatures of the night ^.^

No, it's cool. The plot isn't good if you don't build it.

Good Prologue! I've seen that cutscene so many times it's not funny cough*twenty*cough but I've never seen anyone write it before, and this is good! please update soon!

Hm, as good start. I'm really not much of an elder scrolls: Oblivion fan, but I like your start so much, I'll give this story a shot. Can'y wait to read more of Loki's plight!

Pretty awesome. Wait, why did you watch the ending on youtube? Did you get the ending ruined for you or something? That would sure suck.

sounds interesting