thats the end? it dosent seem like it. like it though.

Nice job. Catch ya on the flip side.

Aw, I was reading this and loved it and you ended it! :[

Oh, well.

hey, i love your story, especially alexis, please update soon!

loved it update soon

loved the chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Okay sad...and a little weird. Anyways who the heck is Trory? I'm like really confused about that!

Also umm is Caleb Danes Luke and Lors(don't know how to spell her name) or just Luke.

sweet

That was an awesome chapter!

Good job

Great story so far! Tristan is an asshole! But i can't wait to see what happens between Finn and Rory!

Please continue soon

BTW Tristan's last name is DuGrey

Yay Finn as a knight in shining armour, Sir Finnegan. Halloween-parties are always fun to read, all those possibilities it brings. it starts with the dressing-up, Tristan, Dean, Nathaniel, and James as superheroes LOL. I love this chapter and can't wait for the next. I think Finn wouldn't mind, having Nurse Rory taking care of him, when he's sick.

Nice way to shut Dean up. I was wondering about Alexis, but I had a feeling that it was his sister. Finn is so cute, taking care of his little sister. but what about his/their father, or will that be explained later? "ik vond het hoofdstuk echt heel leuk", I couldn't think of a new way to say "I really liked the chapter". So I thought, lets say it in Dutch.

loved it update soon

great chapter