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| Grey's-Harry-Fan 2007-11-13 ch 2,  | abuseMattie, Excellent I love how Caly tricked Shunpike into confessing the chasing Harry thingo. Great Chapter again. Also very well written. Update soon. Bec |
| Bec 2007-11-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseMattie, Excellent New Story...I quite liked it. Here is my review as promised, just about to read ch2. You and your imagination never sease to amaze me :P Love the very original names and can't wait to see how Promise and Sam come into it. Keep the great chapters coming. Bec |
| jojobevco 2007-10-27 ch 2, | abuseGood story, I'm just curious about what Caly had to do during Thickneese's time that disturbed her so much? |
| dark-hearted rose 2007-10-26 ch 2, | abuseWell, you already know what I think of this chapter... I like the improvements you made. :) Keep up the great work! love, dark-hearted rose |
| BellaDevil 2007-10-26 ch 2, | abuseO... very interesting matt... very interesting... |
| dark-hearted rose 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseanother agonizingly-long-yet-brilliant chapter. yay. I'm excited. So far, I'm not liking Caly's attitude so much. Perhaps I will once I learn more about her, but right now she's just arrogant and overbearing. Poor Kingsley... o_~ woo! nice writing, though. I love your style. |
| hellobeautifulmc 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseWording is just right. The names are complex. I can't wait to read the back story on Caly. Update as often as you can. :) |
| BellaDevil 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseNice, very good... and strange... what's with the names? do you just scribble down a bunch of letters or something :P anyways... keep writing! |
| peealasbut 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseFantastic story. Great imagination, and impressive use of language. You're a natural writer. Keep updating! |