well it took a life time but it's good to see you've still got it. congrats and good job

Yay fluff! Keep this up, it's great thusfar!

whoa. scary! honey miso and wasabi with rice?! are you kidding me?! urryu must be real nice to be able to choke it down! yuck. :) funny!

u know,i love almost any couple that isn't ichihime. Ichihime is absolutely digusting, but ishihime is so cute! i love it! i hate yaoi couples just to tell you. it's so gay! anyways, straight couples that aren't ichihime are awesome!
:)

This is really good thusfar! I really hope you keep up the good work, because this is an emotionally well-balanced story! I also like that you keep it in Uryu's point of view.

keep up the good work and please write moar!

damn that seems a lil too much like my life, lol pretty damn good

I'l say this aside form a few grammer errors it was indeed pretty good, I like it

I wanna know what happens next. I like Uryuu and Orihime together! Please update and here's a cookie for reviewing my story!

cool story I liked it

hehe so cute, keep it up! I always thought that they the cuttes coples ever!!

You must continue! I love UryuuxOrihime and I want to know more about that sword!

Oh, I forgot to answer the question from chapter 3...yes, you should do different POVs! It makes everything less confusing when you want to move to a different scene or something; it's basically necessary. So that's a big yes.

Omg so funny...I love Ishida-kun's Pepsi Pajama bottoms! Way to add a bit of comic relief in an otherwise intense sitaution. So much foreshadowing for Ishida-kun, what's that creepy sword doing to him?! I'm not sure that I have any criticism for you at the moment, just suggestions on your grammar. I read the three chapters, and there are errors scattered throughout...but otherwise, it's a satisfying read.

hah. pepsi pajama bottoms. nice action sequences, i liked the fast but even pace. but you might want to try twisting your writing style to replace people's names with some other noun. It got a little tiring reading the name "Uryuu" begin a sentence more than three times in one scene.
But other than that, this story is great so far. It explores an angle we don't see much of in Ishida fics.
and yeah, if u want to write through someone else's POV besides Ishida, go for it! but be sure to keep people in character! For example, Inoue isn't going to instantly like Ishida for no reason (although she might be a little vulnerable on the rebound of being denied by ichigo). In fics, keeping people in character is KEY, and you've done a great job so far.
lookin forward to more
-taco

lol! Pepsi Pajama bottoms! that is so funny!
about the writting in pov, hm, i tried it before but it was hard...maybe you should try posting one and see what ppl think^.^
and as always great chpater! make the next one longer!
and update soon:P