great job.

can i have you on my favorite A. list?

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This is pretty good. Keep up the good work.

Logging off,

Dr. Thinker

that was so cool

ps. ME LOVE AJA SHANA AND STORMER!

That was one totally cool story, hope to read more this one on a scale of one to ten, gets a ten thunder lightning strike salute

Great Story!

I always thought that Stormer would make a good Hologram!

faith

one of the most amazing fanfics i've read by far (i adore j&h and their fics)...keep writing, this is talent!

I thought that the story was very good i always liked stormer and i'm glad that she decided to quit the misfits

That was great. I liked it.

Really well done. I wish Stormer had actually left The Misfits and joined The Holograms on the show. Keep up the good work and I hope to see more Jem fics from you in the future.

Hehe, I liked the part where Eric got the stuffing whacked out of him! Should've included Pizzazz in the butt-kicking too. The almost kiddish tone fits in well with how the real shows would have played the scene out, curse words and fighting excluded. Now if you can seperate the paragraphs so it's easier to read, we've got an *outrageous* story! (Pun intended :))