How can Fang knock out Max that easily? Evan though he is improved how could he? i would change that.

What?

omg
i lub dis
rite mure
lub what you did with fang
kryptonite is awesome!

Um...I like it but hate Fang! God a continuation of this would be nice! This is so sad...

i read this, and i swear i cried. this is a really good take on maximum ride. A must read!

It doesn't go with the song. It doesn't go with Fang.

fang would never, he would die before becoming an eraser. he would die again and submit to painful, slow, torture before laying a hand on Max. max's reaction was good though

oh god...
that was deep, man
really made me think...

whoa jeez, can you say ultimatum?
lol.

Continue. now. YOU MUST!

this is sad...
but i liked it
cuz your right, sumtimes
a little angst/tragedy is a good thing

and the song is pretty good too

YES!! best 3 Doors Down song ever! awesome story too. totaly not what i was expecting.

Eh, it was pretty good. I liked the thought of Fang doing anything it takes to protect Max. But honestly your humor/fluff is so much better. I like the tragedy/angst stuff, and this was good as far as the writing style and the plot, but it just didn't seem...you, ya know?

Sorry if this sounds mean. I do like it!

Wingsgirl1313

poor fang.
hillz, I loved it.and that song is awesome. TDG is awesome^
and you're awesome. I feel like saying awesome. awesome.
^^
It's sad, but Fang'll always be my hero...not that he cares, but yeah.
Bottom line:Twas awesome =]

wow.
depressing.
good.
but depressing.

i'll have you know, though, that this story so doesn't suck penguins. so plymouth rock on.