YES! A SzayelxUryuu Doujinshi plz >:3 or something like that X3

Ah but my dear you must update this more often. A year away from your brilliant writing is much too agonizing, especially when you have such a fabulous story line here! You simply must update this as soon as possible!

Anyway, much love for the author and story <3

You can't let this die! Even if it is pure crack, SzayelIshii is one of my favourite couples! You've got everyone so perfectly in character, and I'm glad to see some exploitation of those voodoo dolls... >:D I can't wait to see where you take this!

I really like this so far. I hope you write more soon.

This fic is awesomeness on a stick.

What a way to end! You can't end it there like that! I want to know what Szayel-sama find so funny >:{

I-I-I p-put off reading this for so long and I regret it! This is too cool ^^ It's so well written and the plot, well, I dunno quite what that is yet but i'm loving it! It's already so intense :P

Wasn't it Aaroneiro? Not Arono, also, AporrO not AporrA. I'm sorry, it's just that when people get the names wrong it sort of irks me, because my simple brain is easily confused. And I'm not one to enjoy being in a state of constant befuddlement xD

I love it! Update soon! This too awesome ^_^

more please

Love the story. Don't make your readers wait an entire year for an update - PLEASE! And don't be evil and forget to update...like I do. I wanna read more!

I've been waiting so long for an update! Update more often, I love this!

So far this is one of the few fanfics which really gets szayels' character, or at least what I imagined it to be like.

Keep updating! :)

Oh my, I love this story! Why don't you continue? :/ I wanna read more! It's so delicious~~
Anyway, I'm afraid that no one wants to wait a whole year again... Maybe you should update more often.

i like this so far, good job

why did you have to stop there T^T

Wow this is quite interesting! Please update soon! i wanna read more!

I've waited so long for this update~ I didn't notice till today... I hope you update soon, I can't wait to see what you have planned ^^

-Now has to read part one- ^^' lol
And doujin; me would like to see ^^
Kina x

very coolies on the chpater i like the espada meeting but the ending of the chapter was evil does the laugh mean that he's there or that he's laughing at the doll i wanna read the next chapter and be surprised by the answer ... and don't worry about the update thing it was totally worth the wait

interesting, please update soon!