|Reviews for The Next Step|
| twilight-is-lovee 3/15/10 . chapter 1
Cute. I would read the long story, but you haven't completed it, and considering you haven't updated in over a year...
| VeNae 9/13/09 . chapter 1
Are you going to finish Blue Moon over Manka. I am anxious to finish your story.
| EdwardLovesBella02 5/9/09 . chapter 1
haha that was really cute! Do you have an idea on when you will possibly update the AWESOME Blue Moon? I am really anxious to read more!
| RubyRoseDee 1/8/09 . chapter 1
Can't help but smile at this one. Haven't read "the big one" yet but looking forward to it. I don't know? ... Would Alice tell Bella if she saw the outcome?
| omgiwantthisaccounttogoaway 11/6/08 . chapter 1
| Shstar 10/27/08 . chapter 1
please write more
| lemon-of-the-tent 5/21/08 . chapter 1
Check my previous comments on your other two entries to get the jist of my commenting stlye.
Actually, I usually give more constructive criticism in comments, but these are short and good so there's not much to type.
| not done baking 12/13/07 . chapter 1
I like the SATC reference, in fact any pop reference is pretty awesome.
I don't know if you had this problem in your other stories but when you're writing dialogue if there is supposed to be a period before the... quote-y thing than you use a comma.
“Sorry, can’t help you there,” she winked.
| K-lin J 12/13/07 . chapter 1
I like this idea a lot. Though I do not think I could write about the risky subject. I hope you will continue.
| Booth'slittleanthropologist 10/6/07 . chapter 1
hee hee hee!
| purtyinpink71121 10/4/07 . chapter 1
haha, great job, i liked it.
short and sweet ]