I'm so happy that you're gonna continue on alchemys child..^^ It's really awesome..x3 Go Edward! Show that stupid general! muhahah!

Nice. I lived the ending.

Very nice. That was very Edward.

Hahaha. That was fun. (See, I did review you.) What world are you writing in, apart from the obvious answer ‘your own?’ It seems somehow like the anime world, cut off somewhere in the plot, with manga info thrown in. I liked Mei’s cameo. ^^ Ah, sorrow, Ed is being forced to wear uniform now…not all the time, right? Just for military functions? I can’t imagine him living his life in uniform. He just wouldn’t be himself if he assented, and I’m not talking about image. Kind of hard to imagine him staying in the military at all, but…the story needed it, and the story was good. XD Generally accepted…arrive after Furher Mustang…haha, comments about wit and personality granted, and Mustang’s procrastination skills granted, that annoying charcoal-manufacturer is actually working all the time. Good job designing such a thoroughly annoying character. ‘Yes, old man?’ Pf! Children should be…oh, well done, well done, Edward. And on top of that, even though he was restraining himself, he must have been so obviously dangerously angered, if the helpful commander advised retreating and the general did it. Hah. XD The cake was a good ending.

XD Of course Canada has a military.

Mkay, complaint department, get your notepads ready. Concrit time. In that bit about last year’s dinner I loved so much, you left out the word ‘were’ at the front of ‘still just a little drugged up on pain medication.’ The sentence structure demanded it. There’s definite confusion about where Ed’s sitting, now. You said at the end, so he had only one seat mate (kept it simple to write, check,) however that puts him at either the head or the foot. If he was at the head, he’d be sitting with Mustang, hah. So he’s way at the bottom here--okay, except you placed Al ‘further down the same high table.’ But since Ed's at the bottom, Al's further up somewhere. Among one or two other awkward phrases, I noted ‘due to his seating partner’s idle chatter,’ partly because it’s a troublesome construction most of the time and partly because it really doesn’t sound like Ed, which otherwise you do. Left out a preposition after ‘not just that, oblivious’. You switched tenses in the ‘more expensive the meal’ sentence. Okay, that's enough. Great one-shot.

Trisak out.

this one is really good, though i would have liked a little more humiliation for that general guy, it would have been funny!

I've got to say you write Edward almost perfectly. He's a smug little genius, with a snappy attitude and a smart mouth who's insanely devoted to the people he chooses. he's got his wise moments but mostly he's childish. Perfect! Speaking of which today is the first time I've ever read your writing, so you're going to get more than a couple review from me.=)

Love it! Ed would so do this... A bit more maturity to keep his temper, and maintain the attitidue he already has... :)

Haha. Interesting topic, and a fun read!

He's so cool. XD Nice fic, shows the side of Ed that I like.

I was laughing out loud at a few moments (got yelled at for that...). Man that was good.
Hm... But I have no idea what to say... well... Good job! (yeah, that's it, something that doesn't kill me)
You were really good with keeping the people in character (Ed was a little bit different, but considering the circumstances that's sort of a given need). But yeah, that was fun to read.

Good job. I really enjoyed the tone and voice of this piece.

*is too lazy and tired to critically scan this piece so I can make a good review*

The ending made me crack up. :3 Yay, Ed! ^^

Whoo! Go Canada!

::ahem:: and now, placing my patriotism aside...

Yay! I liked it, it was funny, and Ed seemed pretty much in character, which is more than I can say for alot of the stuff I've been reading lately that shall remain nameless. Plus he got extra cake! But he didn't share any with me. Ah well.

Oh, wow. This had me trying to keep the laughter in, and failing miserably. I particularly loved the bit about Ed being mistaken for a representative of the AWAA...but it says that he was being led to a small table in the corner when he was mistaken for one, and it reminds me of America's war veterans. Some have been waiting for three years for a prosthetic, and others aren't getting the medical care they have been promised. Once they've worn out their usefulness as America's 'Proud Soldiers that defend our country' and done being displayed, most veterans are shoved off into a dark corner to be forgotten.
Enough lingering on the dark side of things, your fic provided me with the humor I needed to get through the day :)

That was totally freaking awsome. It was funny, interesting, and in character. Kudos and digital cookies to you!