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Reviews for: Cement
BlackFalcon002
2007-10-04 . chapter 1
Indeed...reviews are lovely...as is your story. It's pretty, and I just found it while I was browsing...short but sweet, and they can be the best kind, y'know? Thanks for makin' me smile. ;)
Katraa
2007-10-03 . chapter 1
Oh man, the beg. had me thinking it was going to be angst. I was like "OH MAN" outloud XD and my father was staring at me like I was a moron. But ohoh, oh was I wrong!

I loved the beg, middle, and of course, end. Riku's personality in this is just so... dare I say, Yukish XD ... But better because you know, he's Riku and he is much more affectionate and rad and stuff. Yes, he is that!

I love your writing so much ;D It always makes me smi-le. Mhm. Yep. Naturally. OHOH. Now im quoting the fanfic. See, you influence me, dear.

And the cement thing was pretty rad. I liked that a lot :D
And the kiss shared at the end made me heart flutter like a butterfly.

..before i scare you even more, I'll just conclude and say that this was short sweet and awesome ;D I love you, my Sora!

- katraa
also known as riku ... by you.
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