That was cute and sweet!

:)

it was cool

amazinn haha x

Thank you! THIS is how the wedding night should have been. I was so disappointed in Breaking Dawn, what a letdown.

This was absolutely beautiful. Love, loved, loved it. :)

I'm surprised this is your first smut. It was pretty damn good for a first time. Heck, it was good for any time! Keep upi the fantastic writing!

OMG is all i can say. that was the most amazing thing ever! i love it and u have found ur calling. this is amazing and i hope u write more like this. Jacob and Bella together like this would be amazing too.

haha..wow. =]

love it!

lol so dirty i love it

Oh my!
I liked it! It was hot :]

a little more warming up ;)

OH PLZZ DO NOTT STOP! GO ON PLZZ ON AND ON! YOU STOPPED AT THE WORST PART. PLZ GO ON! I NEED U 2~~

This was amazing! I like that you don't go into the 'proper terms' the way some others do. It makes it more enjoyable to read.
PS I love your writing. All of it. ^_^

Haha, she just woke up and she already wants more. Poor Edward.=D

ugh wow lol
isn't it nice this story has quite a few more reviews then the rest. =)