You make it seem like, Minato doesn't even care about his son.. =/


Er..Its okay though :)

What a noble name… and a curious one also, in the end. Naruto is actually named after the fishcakes that are found on top of ramen (the white ones with the red spiral in the middle), but he sounds much more important when he’s compared to the force of nature instead. Keep up the good work, dark

wow..just wow
and..it's really weird how a freaking fanfiction makes me actualy see minato for real,when the manga didn't.i haven't paid enough attention to that part and now i'm like,overwhelmed with thoughts of how-great-minato-was and how-he-should-have-some-damn-chapters..

That was absolutely awesome ^^ Well done :P

i luv the ending ^_^
it was very cute and heart-warming!

That was a good story. I like the ending, it had a settle tone about his past and the story had a good flow to it.

Aw cute

aw, that was a sweet ending,
no minato T.T u must live...LIVE!

Nice use of detail here keep on writing please dattebayo

Great job! Keep up the good work!

COL!! this story had my glued to my chair!

awesome work ^_^ and i can't wait to read more :P