that my friend was awesome but that was mean leaving everyone hangin like that write more and Ill be a happy camper.

What! Your gunna leave it there! That's so not fair! :(

Start your next fic Dawn soon, plz! Your fics are awesome! :D

Jamie

I am reading and I am loved it.

It's a never ending game of catch up for me ;) But here I am! And so glad I have to play catch up, cuz that was NOT a nice cliffie! Though I'm sure my boy will pull through!

wicked

Sorry, Had to flick back to the current one as I wanted to know if Dean was alright and had managed to save his arm. Okay, so that is still ine progress and, now that sadistic blonde is back. Never liked women with shirley temple curls, it's just wrong.

Great so far...

Huh... they took away the extra security precautions to log-in... well, not that that matters for this review. Onward...

Poor Laura. I think you do a great job of showing her internal battle with the demon slice and the manipulations, or just "demons" of a different sort that Laura has hanging around haunting her.

"while the bootied-shoes whispered conspiratorially on the shiny tile floor." - once again, I absolutley love that description! Fantastic.

O. Love Tommy's "convenient" timing. Very nice. Good instincts on that boy.

Aww... poor deputy. Same guy that shot Sam. He's not having a good couple of days. Begs the question - does the marauder use the same person out of convenience or because, once a mind is hacked, it's easier to re-enter... or, if it's "easy" to get into once, it knows it can take over the mind (or at least body/mind connection) a second time.

Nice "battle" between Laura and the Marauder. It was really very easy to "watch" (I seem to be using quotes a lot. Sorry). But truly. I could see it playing out very clearly in my head. Nicely done.

Boy the doc's words at the end were ominous.

Now... tell me that Dawn is next and we don't have to suffer through the darkest night or something first - and I mean suffer in the nicest possible way. :D Because you know I love your stories and your writing and your descriptions and your characters and characterizations. Right? You know what I mean, Right? Right. It's a good thing. But Dawn sounds so hopeful and hopeful is good. too. better. ? Yeah. Think I'll stop talking before I dig myself into a hole or lose my foot entirely. :D

Love ya.

Wonderful story. Perfect place to cliffie. Meep.

Hey, sweetie. Sorry I'm late, but it's been a HUGE couple of days.

This chapter went so quickly! I suddenly came to the end and it felt like I'd only started a minute earlier. The appropriate amount of time had passed, tho, so... I just enjoyed it a lot!

So, is the abomination dead? or just lying low for a while? I vote for Dead!

My poor boys! The dr. did everything he could for Dean, so I guess we wait. I'm not good at waiting, altho I should be by now, huh?

Everyone was in this chapter and I like that, even tho I know that sometimes there's so much going on with one group, that they need the whole chapter. That's ok, but this is fun sometimes, too.

I'll shut up, now. Just trying not to be done with this chapter and have to wait for the next on.

Well done, my dear.

And to think I almost forgot this today... I know what you are thinking "HOW COULD I"... but then again... I didn't so no worries really! :)

It was absence of life that drew her forward, a void shifting its position through an area that should have been saturated with living energy.

Is it too soon to quote when I start with the first sentence? But I just wanted to let you know that THIS... what you are doing here is what just kinda set the mood right away, drawing me closer to the screen and then study the rest of the story... :)

Awesome opening with Laura... seriously... seriously... you know... seriously...

And I feel so bad for the kids... what happened to mommy? And love how Tommy listened to his inner voice when it came to little Sammy knocking on the door, and just the same as he take the kids away from the door where they could have gotten hurt...

And of course little man worrying about his brother, with good reason too cus you beat the crap out of him! still it is very cute :)

And I love the whole... Nope, can't guarantee anything though we will try... We all know, knowing the boys that they most likely will leave just a few days too soon...

I know you sent this sentence to me on yahoo too, but it is a really good one: “Doc...” Shep began with a gentle hand on the man’s shoulder, “Y’ever wondered what just might be out there beyond the day to day?”

And again love Laura's part, awesome battle scene, and I got some awesome images inn my brain... seriously I know I've said that lately but man... I nearly jumped :) (don't ask) :D It was awesome!

And as I said yesterday, as if you would ever kill, or hurt by boy... cus.. you wouldn't... :)

Love it! Totally do!

Sifi - this chapter literally made my very expensive day so much better (PC died on me on Sunday and only now after melting the plastic and buying a new one am I back on line!). I know I keep on saying this but your ability to weave your OCs into the brothers world is simply magical at times - the proof being Tom and Shep in this chapter. You could feel their concern oozing out of their pores as they waited for news on the boys. The good news is that Tom's 'Little man Sam' is fairing a smidge better than Dean whose arm is still suspect - but just how thats gonna turn out is still left so open. Again I find your writing extraordinary, a visual feast that digs deep and lingers long afterwards. Looking forwards to more to come. Rozzy.

Humm... that highway bit kinda confused me, but I still liked it. _ Yay Sam's alright! Now to wait on how my Dean is. *Sits patiently* Next chapter please!

Hi, What, did i just read that, then the end of the chapter, no it can't be, you aren't going to let Dean die are you?

Love this story even though you are a little evil sometimes with the cliffy's you leave us with.

Looking forward to the next chapter. x

what you cant leave it like that! dean can't die!

can't wait till next chapter!

all the best

dudeedaisy x

I love your OC's , so fully rounded and full of personality , even the Dr's. Poor Sam, and what about Dean? Will he keep his arm? Shep and Tom as the perfect peaple to watch over our boys!

But you ended on a cliffie! LOL! Hope the next part is on its way cos i ain't patient! LOL!

You love to freak us out, don't you:-) What can I say. You're doing a great job. Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon.