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| Mellifluence 2007-10-09 ch 1,  | abuseBrilliant, absolutely brilliant. ^^ ...although piecing it together correctly in chronological order was goddamn hard though! |
| Story Weaver1 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseVery emotional and I like that. However the plot is something I have problems with. KH1 the trio was thrown to the winds. KH2 Sora was trying to get back. So I don;t see much reason behind Sora always insisting on Kairi always staying behind. But allowing for that and the rest should follow like you have said. Kairi being the first for a keybland instead of Riku but rejecting from tramua makes sense. and explains the reason Kairi was able to hold and wield the keyblade Riku tossed her. |