wow. i cant believe this only has 2 reviews; it's wonderful! peter does seem a lot more human, and your take on it really fits with the books. i especially love the fact that Peter really doesn't seem to regret his choice, because it makes his first decision even more final. great job!

This is one of the most well written things i've ever read.

Oh. My. God.

You continue to amaze me. That snapshot of life among the Marauders was the most perfect thing I've ever had the opportunity to read about Peter. You made him into more of a human being than I've ever seen before. Great work.