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| smooth.stutter 2008-03-02 ch 1,  | abuse:) |
| Hiei's Cute Girl 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseI found it to be lovely! ^^ Well written, and totally awesome1 Loved it. ^^ |
| Therese Jane 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abuseUm... ** WONDERFUL. |
| HiN4-cH4n 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseFLUFFY!! *happy dances* |
| FakeCompassion 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseAWE That was awesome! |
| Slytherin Kunoichi 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseThe way you wrote this, with the detail and description was completely beautiful. I hope you write more Sai/Sakura. You def' have Sai's character down. |
| Chixon 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseI didn't really mind that there wasn't a plot. It was an enjoyable read, and kept my attention all the way to the end (which is impressive because just yesterday I stopped reading a novel 150 pages before the end simply because "I got bored" with it). Even when I reached the end of your story...er, piece of writing, I was not disappointed in how it finished. In fact I personally think you could end it right there. As far as my opinion on the actual content of the piece, I liked how the point of view changed from Sai in the first section, to Sakura in the second. I thought that it was going to continue on that way for the rest of the story but instead Sai's view seemed to dominate for most of the middle then at the end Sakura's view took more of the dominant role. This resulted in sort of a loss of connection to Sakura's character in the middle and an uncertain feeling about Sai's at the end. Other than that, I liked how the story was emotionally based, and would certainly not complain if you were to add a few more chapters. |