Reviews for Clash in the Land of Snow: Legacy Version!

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john 2008-09-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseI really like this story but you and Sundance are killing us most of us fell in love with your story but you guys never up date; didi you die?
TheOtaku Akatsuki 2008-08-06 ch 12,	abuseoh wow, thats a cool technique, able to be anyone/thing. and steal ppls memories. is 11 a bit old for some1 to wet their bed,. i mean its sasuke!! well naruto typical, and1 can be afraid of spiders. but how?? did he not notice it in his ramen?
Spirit HellFire 2008-08-03 ch 12,	abuseYeah, it's been awhile since the last chapter, but the battle climax and that amazing omake more then makes up for it.
naruto fan 2008-07-18 ch 1, anon.	abusei hope you update soon.
Celeris 2008-07-14 ch 12,	abuseOh my, this is insanely funny. I'm very glad Tellimicus included this in the canon of his Legacy stories. Very nice!
Tellemicus Sundance 2008-07-11 ch 12,	abuseYou know, this has got to be one of your best chapters yet. It felt like almost reading a canon episode, it flowed almost perfectly. I have to admit that Makino's method of starting the fight was just GREAT! And the return of 'Kakashi' was just hilarious, I swear I was laughing so loud my neighbors heard me when I saw 'Kakshi' make one of his patented late excuses and Team 7's reactions to it! ^_^ But the best part was with the mask! That is definitely my most favorite part!! The various things that happened in this chapter were both hilarious and interesting. I have to admit that I broke down laughing my ** off when you had Sasuke get puked on. So the cycle has come to a full circle now with Team 7 each getting retched on! ^_^ I can see what you mean by what you were planning with Sakura. She really hasn't acquired much battle experience in either canon or Legacy at this point has she? That is definitely one of the biggest reasons that she was more of a burden in this fight than she could've been. Plus the fact that most of her current jutsu just aren't up to the spunk with the level of fighting that the boys were doing. But I have no doubt that she'll rebound before the end of this story in her own way. You know, I had originally believed that Bakeru was a human being. But from what you described, he sounds like some kind truly DISGUSTING creature. And, going off the descriptions alone, it doesn't sound like his true form would be a very good one to do battle in. But I completely understand what you mean by his body being unstable. As an experimental shapeshifter, that appears to be a very logical and extremely dangerous drawback for him. When I try to imagine what would happen to him if he completely broke down, I keep seeing a scene from X-Men when that Senator dissolved into a puddle of water. I don't think I've ever laughed so hard from reading a story before in my life than I have when I read this chapter!! Extraordinary job with the humor half of this chapter, and splendid on the fights and character development! So, it sounds like the primary storyline is about to get kickstarted again. I can't wait for it!
Double silver 2008-07-10 ch 12, anon.	abuseHere's my advice go on mangavolume a lot and try out Naruto at Doujin-moe and Hentai-key. Here are some Jutsu: Futon: Sho--Wind Release: Thrust/A very simple Futon that pushes the enemy away. It is more powerful then Fuuton: Reppushou. (Naruto) Futon: Kaze Kunai Dori--Wind Release: Kunai Birds/Made by Naruto Uzumaki. Naruto narrowly focuses massive amounts of Chakra, both Shape and Nature, to his Kunai Knives, Naruto can increase the range and cutting power of them (like Asuma’s trench knives). This requires huge Chakra control and like Kakashi’s Chidori, it makes a unique sound, the sound of a tornado. (Naruto) Fuken: Kaiten--Wind Fist: Rotation/A Wind version of the Kaiten, instead of blue, the Chakra is a snow-like white colour. Like the Raiken: Kaiten, it has a much more devastating effect then the normal Kaiten. when hit, the opponent will have many slashes where they’ve been hit. Naruto can perform this jutsu much easier then the lightning version of it. (Naruto) Fuken: Rokujuyon Sho--Wind Fist: Sixty Four Palms/A wind version of the Hyuga’s Juken: Hakke Rokujuyon Sho. Instead of just sending normal Chakra to the Tenketsu directly, Naruto sends wind Chakra to the general area where the Tenketsu are, severing them along with the chakra lines. Like the Juken: Hakke Rokujuyon Sho it is done at an increasing pace. (Naruto) Katon/Suition/Doton/Raiton/Futon: Ryuheki--Fire Release/Water Release/Earth Release/ Lightning Release/Wind Release: Dragon Wall/Using five handsigns, Naruto vomit’s a large amount of mud out of his mouth to create a huge wall to shield himself from any attack. There are two things that make it different from Doton: Doryuheki, one is that it is made by the most strongest mineral and natural metals from underground, second is that on the front, in the middle of it is a well craved stone head of a dragon. As long as Naruto’s hands are on it and pumping chakra in it. he can repair any damages and can make the dragon open it’s mouth and send an enormous waves of Blue fire, water, high pressure winds and bolts of lightning that can blanket a huge area. (Naruto) Kage Kitsune Shiki--Shadow Fox Reaper/This is an S-ranked Jutsu that Naruto has experimented on in secret for some time, it’s where Naruto creates one clone of himself but this clone is different: Instead of having short yellow hair and blue eyes, the clone has long spiky black hair and red eyes, also instead of wearing the orange jumpsuit and track pants the clone wears a black Martial Arts uniform (like that uniform the Soul Reapers wear in Bleach). It holds a large Head Cleaver in it’s left hand with cloth warped around this handle (Think of Ichigo’s Zanpakuto’s Shikai form in Bleach) and holds a black Daito (Japanese Long Sword) in this right hand (Think of Ichigo’s Zanpakuto’s Bankai form in Bleach) with a fire symbol at the back of his hilt. Naruto makes it that the nine tailed fox’s soul can slip into the clone allowing Kyuubi to be in complete control of the body. Since Kyuubi is in control, the only way he’ll fight is if he gains something from it (Kyuubi hasn’t been able to breath fresh air and eaten real food in years so he’s pretty comfortable with Naruto’s terms usually). Kyuubi can use only half his chakra (the rest is still in Naruto) and all of Naruto’s techniques. Kyuubi, being the demon of fire, can analysis any fire technique and copy it if is not a Kekkei Genkai (anything Kyuubi learns, Naruto learns when the Jutsu wears off eventually) Kyuubi can stay in this body for five and a half days before his soul is sealed back in the seal and the clone’s body turns to ashes and dust (The number of injuries both Kyuubi and Naruto get in battle as well as long distance separation can quicken the process). Finally both Naruto and Kyuubi’s bodies are connected; if one dies the other is bounded to follow that same fate in a instance. (Naruto) Tenkuoi Zansho Getsugasa--Heavenly Black Cutting Stabbing Moon Fang Chain/A technique that Kyuubi does in his Kage Kitsune Shiki form. He turns the blade bit of his weapon into a long black chain with snow-white fangs all over it. The fire symbol transforms into a full moon symbol. Kyuubi can expand the length and size of his unbreakable chain and the fangs as well as make it act like a snake under his control. (Kyuubi) Kurohitsugi--Black Coffin/Creates a box of unique black Youki around the target, Then the target is pierced by spears made by Youki, so small that they pierce the atoms in the body from head to toe. Even Kyuubi admits this technique is quite troublesome because it takes so much of his Youki. (Kyuubi) Katon: Chigoka Shurikendan--Fire Release: 10 Fire Shuriken Bullets/A Katon which Kyuubi can make a thousand small shuriken made out of fire which Naruto can control with his mind. (Kyuubi) Katon: Sokatsui--Fire Release: Blue Fire, Crash Down/A advancement of the Katon: Gokakyu, the fire is blue, carries more heat, can take up a large area and needs more Chakra. (Kyuubi) Katon: Soren Sokatsui--Fire Release: Twin Lotsu Blue Fire, Crash Down/A double version of Katon: Sokatsui. (Kyuubi) Katon: Haien--Fire Release: Abolishing Flames/A Katon that creates purple flames that will incinerate anything it touches. (Kyuubi) Kaken: Kaiten--Fire Fist: Rotation/A fire version of the Kaiten where Naruto uses the Kyuubi‘s chakra, making it red instead of blue. Like the Raiken: Kaiten and Fuken: Kaiten, it surpasses the normal Kaiten. When hit, the opponent will get third-degree burns where he has been hit. (Naruto) Kaken: Rokujuyon Sho--Fire Fist: Sixty Four Palms/A fire version of the Hyuga’s Juken: Hakke Rokujuyon Sho. Instead of just sending normal Chakra to the Tenketsu directly, Naruto sends fire Chakra to the general area where the Tenketsu are, burning them along with the chakra lines with the heat of first-degree burns. Like the Juken: Hakke Rokujuyon Sho it is done at an increasing pace. (Naruto) Hyoton: Nikaku Cho Hakuegei--Ice Release: Two Super Horn White Whale/An upgrade on Hyoton: Itsukaku Hakuegei. Naruto creates a more larger (and faster) whale composed of ice with two horns, this whale can crush twice as much then the original. (Naruto) Doton: Kibaku Rokku Tobi Kobura no Gousunkugi--Earth Release: Exploding Rock King Cobra of the Underworld/A exploding Jutsu that surpasses Deidara’s Clay (I’ll let you think how it should work). (Sakura) Raiton: Byakurai--Lightning Release: White Lightning/A weak raiton where Naruto the user shoots a concentrated bolt of lightning from his index and middle fingers. (Kyuubi) Raiton: Taji Shuurai--Lightning Release: Multiple Lightning Strike/A lightning version of Katon: Hosenka Jutsu. The damage is approximately the same as that of the Hosenka. (Sasuke) Raiton: Raikoho--Thunder Roar Cannon/Fires a massive wave of electricity at the target. (Naruto) Raiken: Kaiten--Lightning Fist: Rotation/Naruto developed this Jutsu for two reasons, the first so he could show it off at Konoha to insult the Hyuga family further, second reason was because he didn’t have any other Raiton Jutsu’s like Sasuke. It works the same way as the normal Kaiten does, the only different is that the Chakra is golden yellow colour instead of blue and does a lot more damage to the opponent. After being hit, the opponent will be either dead or a serious case of being shock. (This Jutsu is Superior to Sasuke’s Chidori Nagashi) (Naruto) Raiken: Rokujuyon Sho--Lightning Fist: Sixty Four Palms/This Jutsu, is the result of Naruto’s many hours of studying the Hyuga’s Juken: Hakke Rokujuyon Sho and experiencing it first hand from Neji. Instead of just sending normal Chakra to the Tenketsu directly, Naruto sends lightning Chakra to the general area where the Tenketsu are, frying them along with the chakra lines. Like the Juken: Hakke Rokujuyon Sho it is done at an increasing pace. (Naruto)
fanfic fans 34 2008-07-09 ch 12, anon.	abusei hope u update soon.
wolvknight 2008-07-09 ch 12,	abuseGood chapter interesting fight scene =D Poor Sakura...
Zoneshifter D 2008-07-08 ch 12, anon.	abuseYou are steadily improving in your quality, that's for certain. I wonder how you are going to get them to patch things up again? As for Bakeru, you pulled out all the stops when it came to limitations for him, didn't you? From the description alone, he seems Damn Ugly. Poor, Poor Sakura. Too bad it's so hard to break protective habits, especially since Sakura wasn't the most competent before the timeskip, even in regular canon. Seriously, the "Itachi" scene was real messed up. I totally understand Sasuke's berserk rampage after that happened. Wait, he didn't quite rampage, did he? But he was still freaking P.O.
Herooftimes 2008-07-07 ch 12,	abuseanother grat chapter, even if it took awhile...nice idea for the homing jutsu and its weaknesse...
atlantis-rob 2008-07-07 ch 12,	abuseExcellent fight, great job choreographing all the different skills/people/powers etc. Can't wait to see what happens next for the trio!
BG 2008-07-07 ch 7, anon.	abusegreat story so far! i have noticed some grammer errors but otherwise your writing is superb. and may i say that was the FUNNIEST Omake i have ever read, i was laughing the entire way through keep it up
taintedlegacy 2008-07-06 ch 12,	abuseNice fight scene. I can't wait to see what precautions the members of Team Seven take in order to keep the crew safe. Keep up the good work and update soon!
Bailin 2008-07-06 ch 12,	abuseYou've been watching Zatch (or rather, Gash) Bell lately, haven't ya? Different name, but that "Raiton: Akari Rensa Handou no Jutsu is almost straight out of the fight with the "Berserker King" during the "Thousand-Year-Old Demon" arc. Especially after that arc ends. Ah well, pulling elements from other anime is a great way to enhance a good fight, so long as it's subtle or at least incorporated well. Another great chapter, keep it up, see ya later!

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