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Reviews for: Asuka's Visit
onewingedangel73187 4/15/10 . chapter 1
Its actually Ritsuko-hakase, or alternatively Akagi-hakase, but someone has probably already pointed that out. Anyway, cute little fic
Epicentre 10/15/03 . chapter 1
Very well written. This has to be one of my latest Asuka/Touji favorite fanfictions. The fact that the story takes place in a hospital makes it very interesting. There's little blotches of OOC, but nevertheless the fic turned out quite well. I hope to read more of your writings. Another Touji/Asuka fic in the near future, perhaps?
Tig Jones 8/29/01 . chapter 1
really really very good. great job
NocturnalFerri 8/29/01 . chapter 1
Aiiee! I really liked it. it was really kewl cuz you dont see much Toji and Asuka centered stories out there. Well written too. The OCC was ok, cuz you managed to pull it off. yeah!
Luke 8/26/01 . chapter 1
That was real good never thought that a trip to the hospital could be that interesting to read about
tomoyo 'cheer up emo kid' cuom 8/26/01 . chapter 1
that was kickin' ass yo! O.o; Er, ok, just wanted to say that. That was a suteki na fic... I loved Asuka's confession, especially the burning azure eyes... it really conveyed the image... Really, really good. That's all I can think to say right now.
Quincy007 8/26/01 . chapter 1
Not bad. It seemed to work for the situation. I enjoyed reading it. Good work.
Cook 8/25/01 . chapter 1
Well written. That is very true. But I got a feeling of deeper implications arising from Asuka visiting Touji. Shinji is the only one for Asuka. And that is that.
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