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The Fortune Teller 2/2/11 . chapter 1
This was really wonderful - :D. There need to be more Helen/Barry fics.
Lady Maramalade 9/17/05 . chapter 1
I think your story is very good. I especially like the part with Barry and Helen. IMO, i think that you should add more to this story and tell us whether Barry died or not.
MG 1/29/05 . chapter 1
This was amazing! well done!
HermoineGirl03 7/15/04 . chapter 1
add more chappies please
karen 11/17/03 . chapter 1
hey im a huge fan of helen and barry. i you i also hated the movie because they made two of the most coolest and best couple die. well there isnt really much stories of heln and barry so if you could please write more stories like this. yor a really talented writer please please!
SodapopC 9/14/03 . chapter 1
that was awesome...reminded me of how much i loved helen and barry.
haley 8/4/03 . chapter 1
I think the collaboration works best. Ya know... Barry and Helen staying alive and not being an airhead or a jerk. And what was Barry thinkin in the movie going up on that balcony? Alone? And Helen didn't have to slow down running. She was almost home free.
Jennifer-Phoenix 4/22/03 . chapter 1
I love this story. I can't get enough of Barry and Helen. Who cares about Ray and Julie? I agree that he's a sweetie but she ... (need I say more?)

I've read the book too but I was a bit disappointed because Barry is such a total jerk in it.

Keep up the good work

JP
JoyfulPeace 3/16/03 . chapter 1
great lil vignette! i just recently saw the movie and im thinking bout buying the book, it's great to see some barry/helen parts. I loved them... i agree w/ u about julie lol
lulu 3/16/03 . chapter 1
omg! i loved that story! i am a big helen/barry shipper. i really wish we saw more of that in the movie! i also think that you should continue, except find some way for them to not die, like in the book.
Effervescence 2/21/03 . chapter 1
Aw, that was so sweet. You portrayed the relationship between Helen and Barry really well.I wish they would've shown more of that in the movie.

Anyway, great job!
Sharon 2/16/03 . chapter 1
This story so sucks! I thought Julie and Ray were a great couple! And yeah Julie does have fans and she wasn't a major bitch!
Sharon 2/16/03 . chapter 1
This story so sucks! I thought Julie and Ray were a great couple! And yeah Julie does have fans and she wasn't a major bitch!
Ersuela 1/7/03 . chapter 1
Yeah, the book was good. We read it in English this semester. Sweet story. D I loved it.
monnie 10/19/02 . chapter 1
I like the fact that it was a Barry/Helen story. There r so many Julie/Ray stories. It'd be so nice to see more Barry and Helen .
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