 BlueandRedButterflies 2009-06-12 . chapter 1Aw! So cute!
Have I reviewed this story before? I can't remember. Anyway...
The only thing I'd like to coment on is that I believe that Pooh would most likely say "Oh bother" instead of "Oh dear". But other than that, perfect! 10/10!
Soon, I'll be publishing (on this site, anyway) a fanfic about Roxas and Pooh. When I finally get around to doing so, could you look at it? I think you've got a good grasp of Pooh's character and the relationship between him and Sora. It'd help me a lot, because I'm having a bit of trouble writing Pooh right now...
Anyway, great job! Keep it up!
BlueandRedButterflies |
 PEJP Bengtzone 2008-08-31 . chapter 1After Sora, Donald and Goofy helped Tron defeat MCP and Commander Sark, the town became more of a city, and started to use its original name, The Radiant Garden, again. So if Hollow Bastion is still used, it's probably nothing more than just a downtown district of the city of Radiant Garden.
Anyway, you did feature Christopher Robin, but I wonder of that Heffalump is Lumpy, who's a friend of Roo. Don't you know who Kessie the Bluebird is? |
 IdesofMay 2007-10-04 . chapter 1That was very cute, but also sad - not a combination easy to pull off! I believe it's Hollow Bastion, and I would have preferred "For many days and many nights," to "For many day and many night" but the word choice and style were spot-on for 100 Acre Woods. |
 chyna 2007-10-04 . chapter 1 aw that was cute |
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