No!! I don't want to sound selfish but you gotta update this!! It's so cute!! And sweet!! And stuff!! Well, I just thought I'd go ahead and point out the obvious C:

D: what's going to happen to Lawliet? i can't wait for the next chapter to come out!
-Jesi

Nice story you have here :) Really looking forward to the next chapter update soon!

Aw. Poor L! That is so sad!
I could totally picture the whole ending part. TT.TT

Adorable fic you have here. keep up the awesome work.

Aw, poor Lawli-kun >_< How could you let something so bad happen to him? And, if Light doesn't learn some manners soon, he'll surely have to deal with me, lol.

Sorry for the rant. I got a little worked out with everything happening to poor Lawliet :)

Anyway, another great story :) Again, I find the characters realistic and the action slow paced (don't worry, that's a good thing :)

Please update soon! :)

you MUST MUST MUST update!!
this story is too good for you not too!!

Aw Lawliet is so CUTE!

Who would want to hurt poor Lawly-pop? T_T

Spottedstar106

You have not updated in a very long time now (for a month!)
Please, I'm sure you dont want to leave L all bloodied and broken.

Since I finally went and made some time for myself, I went to read this. (I wish I had made time sooner) You're a very good writer, and I am enjoying the way the story is developing. Especially the relationship between L and Light. I don't think they would have become insta-friends if they’d suddenly met as children, and the way you show that is wonderful. I'll be waiting for more!

Poor Lawli-chan! *cries* I Luverz This Storie! Update again soon!

Ohmygod! I should have found this story earlier. The angst, the sweet angst! So freaking awesome. You're a very talented writer, you are. I spent all evening (kind of) reading this fic, and it was so worth it. Lawliet is delightfully innocent (but still L XD) and you are so right that Raito's prickishness is amazing too. I know it seems mean to write poor little Lawliet all beaten up, but hell, I would have done the same. Resulting angst=brilliance. And now Raito's all worried about him, and he'll soon feel bad about his 'plan' la la la LA LA!

So I know it's the holidays and everything, but I, for one, would very much appreciate an update of this wonderful fic you have breeding here. But, update whenever you do, there's no rush! Thanks for writing and posting!

Happy Holidays!
CFXXL

Aw! I love your story!

Ooh, another chapter! Please, please don't vanish again like that and update soon!