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| Housewoodblues 2008-09-02 ch 1,  | abuseSo good, great job! |
| Naga 2008-08-05 ch 1, | abuse*squee* My 3 favorite bat-accomplices, all in 1 room (even if Alfred only made a cameo). I can't remember, have Jim and Lucius met before in the movies? I don't think so, so this is very nice, very understated but very *them* at the same time. Nice one. |
| kitsunelover 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abuseGreat atmosphere, and the dialogue sounds spot-on. I love the idea of Gordon visiting Batman's house and remaining completely oblivious. |
| DXRULES103 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseDo continue! I'm intrigued about where this could go. |
| noiseforyoureyes 2007-12-20 ch 1, | abuseBless you for writing this. I have a soft spot for Gordon - especially as played by Oldman... I can so easily see this exchange taking place. You nailed Fox's wryness, as well. I love that his smile was insincere - as if it's against his nature to lie. Lots of great, small touches like that in this fic, adding to the characterizations. Bravo! :) |
| Sexy Scottish Accent 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseThis was interesting, but I wish that Jim had met Bruce. That would've been interesting to see play out. |
| KrisEleven 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. This was an excellent piece of writing, the characterizations were perfect. |
| Philippa 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. I thought Jim's characer was very well rendered, and I loved Barbara's role and the way she so desperately tries to make him presentable for polite society! I also enjoyed Fox's evasions - very clever way to use Bruce's lie about where HE got poisoned. Are you planning a continuation? |
| jadeddiva 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abuseThis story is excellent - pitch-perfect. You get the characterization of both Gordon and Fox absolutely perfect, and it fit into the storyline of the movies so well. I really enjoyed it :) |
| mirrorconspiracy 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuse"'I’ll have to abandon you to the wolves, now, Lieutenant. It’s been a pleasure meeting you.'" oh, beautiful. i sincerely hope you continue this! |