Ooh, very interesting. I like the vagueness and mystery. I think that you can actually understand the feelings of the character better if you don't know the circumstances, because then your opinion on the action or event doesn't taint your feelings about the character's thoughts. Does that even make sense? I'm really tired...

Nice, I like it. Could you maybe write a sequel that shows the...whatever, from Wilson's POV? That's be SO cool!!

That was pretty good, it's captivating actually. (it could do without the vulgarity though) :)
I really liked it honestly even with it's shortness it was really good!
M.W.H.

^^ mh...sounds nice...but what the heck happened? like to write another chapter? pulease? ó.ò