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| narutofan1091 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseOkay as for the first chapter, I see one mistake: Firion is supposed to be fighting the Emperor guy not Garland, Garland's enemy is the The Light Warrior from Final Fantasy I. Sorry I just had to point that out but if you really meant to have Firion vs Garland thats fine with me too lol! Great story so far. |
| gurgler2 2008-04-29 ch 1, anon. | abuse...its good...its good. I liked the cecil vs. kain fight. So, i expect the rest to be very good. |
| C2-Chikaru 2008-02-02 ch 4, | abuseThe black mage 'twit' cracks me up ya gotta write more about him/her TxT! |
| Mace The Manakete 2008-01-09 ch 2, | abuse3 words: hi-la-rious. who's that black mage? just like Cloud, he annoys me. anyway, update soon. |
| Rhodes's 2008-01-09 ch 2, | abusegreat fic. I can't wait for Dissidia and I was really happy to see an actual fiction of the game. that's a first. btw, what's the story plot? i know that there are fighting but i don't get the deal with Cosmos and Chaos and the whole gang. |
| Mii World 2008-01-09 ch 4, | abuseoh wow. Oh Wow... OH WoW!! FINALLY A DISSIDIA STORY!! And it's awesome! the moment I started reading it I was hooked like a drug! the combats are well descriptive, the characters's personalities really match. Plus, who knew this was so funny with Twitty in the gang? keep on writing, man! |
| Akane Nishimura 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abusenot bad, not bad at all ^.^ keep on writing! |