good just write more

This is actually very well written, but why the hell did you think combining Dogma and Jurassic Park would be a good idea? Alone, Dogma is a great movie and Jurassic Park 3 sucks (The original was good but both sequels bite the big one). Together, it's just plain strange. This is definitely the oddest of the crossovers I've seen, but kudos for the good writing. :-)

Your stories don't suck, so quit telling yourself that! I like this one so far, but the idea of a Dogma/Jurassic Park 3 crossover still scares me. Oh, well. That's just my opinion. I'm sure you can pull it off. And now I'm rambling. Well, good job so far, and I hope to read more soon. )