An excellent piece of romantic fiction with a few electrically charged frissons thrown in for good measure! Whenever I end up in a friends house soaking wet I normally get given a cup of tea, a stale biscuit and then I get thrown out again but this was altogether more interesting. I really enjoy your descriptive narrative and the dialogue works very well too. I can't say I know the series but it really didn't matter. Charming.

OMG, so cute... congrats on having, like, the only Dai/Kyo pairing so far. (sighs) Caire is cute and all but... no. No claire/Daisuke. Nope. You did great! Write some more!