okay so not to be mean or anything but in this fic ron is a little bit out of charecter and ginny is a little out of charecter

aah great story, I'd have loved if you had continued this...

Beautiful, as always; loved the metaphors and the short phrases that meant more than short phrases, and the poetic language, and update soon, BUT...WHEN ARE you going to update JUST SMILE?!?!?!??! Please update JUST SMILE soon...

“Perverted lust is not love Ginny.”

HAHA! Ginny got told. SO Ron wrote about her in his Diar-I mean, Journal? and so she acted upon it even though she's like, THIRTEEN.

I love that they are kids and this is just so, angst and dark and I love it, because it suits them and their always grim, dirty, faces.

Ginny, Ginny Ginny, you fool.

loved the angst update, it was so...HARSH.

"Preverted lust is not love ginny"

Ouch.

Another beautiful chapter.

I missed your fics last month(not that I dont love your novel, cause i do)

I love the thing about her being fire, and Ron trying so hard to do the 'right' thing.

oh kids.

amazing as aways love

I don't know what is more upsetting, the actual story or how you Mal and Steph are all like "they should die!" all gleefully!!

This is almost a poem in prose. Congrats for one of the most charming fics I've ever read.

So I took a children's lit class in college and i learned that most children stories and fairy tales are actually really morbid and ** up. I'm really glad that you are going to continue with that.

I really like the aspect of Ginny losing her memory. It always kind of bothered me that she lost all of her memories when Tom Riddle was in her body and I love that you built upon that.

I'm holding out for them both to die. Oh, can you make it really stupid and Romeo&Juliet like, where they kill themselves because they can't be together? I'd love that.

I know this is a lot to copy, but I think this whole thing is one of my all time favorite things from you:

"But things don’t go as plan.

Momma said that too and she starts to think that maybe she should start listening to that orangey red headed woman more often. For it’s not him who saves her but Harry freaking Potter and it’s not him who’s her life is indebted to, but Harry freaking glasses wearing, scar carrying Potter.

And the worst part of all?

She’s in love.

She doesn’t know if it’s the whole emotional baggage and ordeal of almost, you know, dying, or that usually damsel’s in distress fall utterly and inexplicably in love with the heroic knight that risks their butts off to save them, and really, she’s just following protocol. Or maybe-and she doesn’t want to think it twice as a possibility, but maybe, she’s just looking for revenge.

Because he was suppose to save her, not him, and he was suppose to swoop her up into his arms, maybe quite possibly give her CPR-mouth to mouth, until he took her breath away and he was suppose to be the one she fell in love with in the end, not Harry Potter.

Worst of all? He was not supposed to fall in love with her, either."

Like words can't even describe.

Love you
~Mal

i'm EXTREMELY confused. PLEASE don't tell me you're going to end up making Ginny be with Harry afterall. NO! Besides, Harry's supposed to be with Hermione. Don't you think?

this is getting confusing but oh so very good, still, at the same time.

so what you need to do is update and let us see what happens.

oh and yes, kill them off, let them bang each other and then kill them both off. :)

So does Ginny die in this?

Sorry, one track mind.

You know, I hate her much less when she's in love with Ron. I hate Ron less here too.

I like the 'fairytale' thing. Its beautiful.

love you.

She doesnt even remember that Ron is her brother?


OH NO!

that was actually quite sad...and the fact that she falls for Harry only to get back at, what I would presume, Ron for liking Hermione was so insanely bittersweet.

update now

Grumble my is still broken im surprised it is letting me review right now. I love RON AND GINNY THANKS TO U! I mean I still hate them both but put them together as a couple like you did and I love them. This was so oh how do I say it bloody brilliant! I pray that you continue this I love Fairytales and how she wished him be her prince. Too cute yet sad really.

cute story...though ya i guess it'd be perverted cuz there young.but i read alot of young sex on here.its ok. I hope they at least kiss