Hey man, nice Story you have here, too bad you abandoned it...

But if you choose to return I'll be one of the firsts (If not the first) to review it

Ios is now the perfect Xenomorph Annihilator Prototype because he has demonstrated that incorporation of their soldier's minds into his design will work! Using orphans to test the design was like tempting fate and yet they have a working prototype now! I wonder if three and four will discover who they are to cooperate with each other or get themselves killed?

The military fighting fire with fire makes me think of them making the K-Series Aliens in Aliens Versus Predator:Extinction! I wonder if having a hive of K-Series Aliens under their control would stop the Xenomorphes or bring the Predators down on them for disrupting their hunts?

This story is absolutely awesome, there's not many Alien fanfics that keep me interested beyond the first page, but this is a great idea and it's kept me hooked. The suspense during the security breach was spot-on, I love how you handled that through the AI.

I'm not nit-picking, but I thought you'd find it interesting to know that Weyland-Yutani was 'bought out' by Walmart, according to Alien Resurrection (which is why the US Military is running things in that film). You probably already know this, mind.

Really keep this up, I wanna read on til the end!

Oohh...So now we have a drone and a runner on the human side, with an aggressive xenomorph with human knowledge on the other side... I wonder when the #3 and #5 will meet? It could be like a family reunion. *lol*

Oh *chuckles* My favorite scene...a boy turned into a xeno by evil scientist ^^; I'm so evil. Don't mind become one myself though ^^;

Ahh...Judging by your usual plot...I'm making a guess that he would be falling in love with a woman human soon...maybe the female scientist even? =P

Cool story, I like the plot a lot, it's pretty interesting so far. Keep up the good work! Hope you update soon.

This is awesome. Awesome!! I can picture Weyland-Yutani actually doing something like this. It's like the cloning side effects for Ripley, taken up a notch! Way up! You know, I didn't even think there would be any fanfics for the Alien series. Then i checked, and found this quality stuff! Thank You! Update soon!

Glad to see you're back with this story. Now I'm assuming Juggernaut is Number 4. I wonder when Ios meets the other two, will Juggernaut try to kill him since he's a hybrid too... or he just likes killing random things. Maybe even a team up, Drone and blood obsessed Runner against psycho Praetorian!

Well, well... so the dead do rise again...and so fitting for the holiday season...Nicely done (as usual)and the action/flow was certainly going at a break-neck pace. I am glad Ios got off his carapaced duff and decided to venture into the breach.

Honestly - glad that you are back and writing AVP for us. Not to be a whiner or anything - but any hope of another Cyrosyl chapter as well? (I know, I know - don't push it girly...). Thanks for your hard work and catch you on the next update! ::wink::

A very good story! update soon

Firstly - let me apologize for not reviewing after every chapter - I just got caught up and wanted to keep going...so this mis-mash is what happens...sorry.

I love your expressive quotes at the start of chapters 5 and 6 - very, very well done. You are an extremely talented improv guy. I hope that you add more of your Buddha-like (ok, Buddha didn't exactly talk about sending people on to the After-Life, but he should have...maybe more like Nietzsche? or Genjyo Sanzo?) pearls of wisdom to more chapters. ;)

Ios's dilemma of not being able to fully communicate with Sarah is what it must be like for the those who are 'dumb' (I know, not very PC, but then again I am not always a very PC girl...). The frustration however only adds to the wonderful tension and suspense that you are building up. Coupled with Ios's cynicism it makes him an extremely enjoyable character (I like him almost as much as Spine -hint, hint and nudge, nudge...). As a fellow cynic and snark I can relate to him very well.

You do write from a feminine point of view well - something that few heterosexual males (yes - read your bio!) are truly capable of. You have a believable middle ground - she is neither butch or Mary Sue, but rather the Every Woman. She displays the right emotions at the right times, and in the proper quantity. Bravo.

So , there it is. You really did deserve one for every chapter, and I promise to do just that for this and 'The Cryosyl Theory' ~ because you deserve all the kudos in the world.

Thanks for all your hard work, and I really look forward to more updates!

'Catz

Wow this is really good
I really like the story, i hope that it gets to explaining how Ios was turned or how his DNA etc was put in a xenomorph
Also what is the deal with number 4 why is it so aggressive, is it the host it used to be or another reason

LOL! Bones is kool, as is Ios! please continues this story!
Video gaming xeno! LOL

Wow. This is an excellent story. The potential you get from adding human emotion to something as menacing as the Xeno makes for a truly gripping read.

I said "NO!" aloud when I got to the end of 9. The story really has legs.

your writing style fits with the Alien atmos perfectly. Awaits Ios/Bones chapter.