Well, the backstreet boys suck anyways, so I don't think it really matters.

Oh lawl. I laughed at the antennae hair-flicking part. xD

That was really cool! I usually don't like Kimblee all that much--blowing up stuff is not my favorite pastime--but your depiction of him is very interesting.

I can't wait to see how things are going to evolve now that Havoc's here too.

Also, I laughed out loud at the "Who are you calling so young he could do undercover work in nurseries!" part.

I really look forward to reading what will happen next. Thanks for sharing such a nice story! :3

I must say I'm confused as Roy at Ed at the moment. I mean, I didn't see anything to get jealous of. *shrugs* But then my favorite blonde is barely controlled rocket.

Oh, shiny story. Loving it. How old is Roy here? I LOVE that you put them in this situation, and stuck Ed in Ishbal. It makes me happy. You haven't updated in a while, could you please please update soon? I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next.

Huh. This appears to be a pretty good fic. A little on the short side (a bit of a pet peeve for me) but satisfactory nonetheless. I'll definitely be looking into this one much further in the future.

Though you do seem to have an error or two here and there, I see nothing wrong with this first chapter. Except that it's so damn short! Please tell me the rest of the chapters you've posted are longer than this one?

Ja ne,
Blue

silly overreacting edward. i guess he is a teenager despite everything...and he did kinda act like an insecure whiny woman after claiming not to be one...(stress on the insecure part). poor roy, he didnt' even do anything wrong. he wasn't remotely flirting, and he didnt' yell at ed for jumping to conclusions, and ed pulls that shit! bad edward!

well that was..-- uhm wat happened why'd ed get so mad?

Great story! I read this a while ago, but I never posted a review. =[

Anyways, look for my reviews on the other chapters. =] I'll be posting!

whens the next chap coming...

Oh, my god. This story is awesome, I can't wait for the war to start.

I think this chapter is just a reflex of what you are into right now...
Anyway, I took advantage of it too... and enjoyed it very much. Bye.

Wait... So does Ed have his automail in this fic? I can't tell... =_=;

And at first I thought Ed and Roy had become a little more secure with each other. Obviously they're not there yet.

I had been a little confused at first, regarding time but it was easy enough to figure out what was going on. Happy to see an update, even if its been so long. -FG