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| caz1969 2008-07-21 ch 1,  | abuselol,this is great loved it |
| cheekycrumpet 2008-07-19 ch 1, | abuseWas just re-reading this because it's one of my favorites, as are you. :D |
| toothchick 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseThis was HOT! Loved the line...you wouldn't have asked me to Vegas...you would have begged!! Very playful & true to their characters!! |
| Graymoon74 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseGirl...I think I sinned just reading this. Drooling madly now. Very nice =) |
| microgirl 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseThis was such a great one-shot. I liked that they were so carefree and playful with each other. I thought this line was dead on for Sara: You wouldn’t have asked me to come to Vegas.” She kissed him and pulled back, drawing out his lower lip between hers. “You would have begged.” Thank you for this fluffy take on A La Cart. |
| JackofSpade 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseFavorite Line: “You would have begged.” Sweet Goodness! My finger tips are burned just from touching the keyboard! |
| Kristafied 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseHee, hee, hee. This is funny and a conversation I could totally see these two having. I love the bit about the "shutting down and rebooting" and the "sex bed" -- and the eagerness of Grissom's response ("They can be.") when Sara says she thought blow jobs were the key to a man's heart. This is great. |
| Chicklit 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuseThis is absolutely fabulous -- Thank you! |
| gsrshipper9 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuselol, loved it! i loved the last line! |
| 4NZic 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abuseThis was a gorgeous piece of GSR writing. Perfect. Sexy as hell, but also sweet and funny like they are. There are some wonderful lines of dialogue in it that mirror the wit we see from Grissom and Sara on the show, so it is very in character too - which explains why I like it so much, because it gives an idea of what behind-the-scenes is like for them. Hot. My favourite lines were these funny ones: “I always pictured your bed being very…functional. If you had one at all. For all I knew, you just occasionally shut down and rebooted your systems.” Her lips twisted up in an irresistibly wicked grin. “Turns out you have a sex bed.” Excellent. Thank you very much, I'm still smiling. |
| GSRgirlforever 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abuseTalk about HOT, wow. I really liked it. |
| felena1971 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abuseWOW! Erotic without being overly explicit! LOVE LOVE LOVED it! |
| elfling65 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abuseWhat a delicious story! Yum, yum, yum. |
| blueMnM415 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abuseWoot!! Good GSR-y smut! Great stuff, i liked it! |
| WalkerTRngr 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely perfect! |