This is really good. FAVORITE!

Oh, and one thing I thought of as I was sending the review. Generally it's considered to be bad form to hold fic hostage for reviews. Although, of course, reviews are wonderful, you should be writing for the love of it.
I really hope you don't take this the wrong way. I liked your story. But a few years ago, somebody ripped apart one of my stories for a lot of the same faults yours had and ones that were even worse. It was harsh. Frankly, after I read it, I cried, because it was the first time anyone had ever told me that my work was crap; I deleted my work and vowed not to write again. But afterwards, I realized that my work really was crap, and I vowed to make it better. Now it is (although, of course, I'm still learning new things every time I write-- I'm still far from perfect). Now I'm trying to return the favor.
It really was a good idea you had.

Great chapter! I really enjoyed it! Maybe Harry and family could go to Godric's Hollow together or have a picnic or something!! Also, they could watch their remaining family members together! That's about the extent of my ideas!! Thanks lots and lots for writing!

great I love it

Ok, this is really for chapter 1, but I decided i would just review both chapters at once. Unfortunately there was only one chapter! So! I really enjoyed chapter one, the sarcastic comments and the lines which i unfortunately didn't recognize from Wicked. I am going to find your sequel now, thanks so much for writing!

This is how i think it should have ended too- happy! I expecially loved the line -And then they smushed their lips together more…and here’s Dan with the weather…Oh, I think they’re done.

I was practically dying by laughing so hard at that point.

Great Job! =)
I'm gonna go read the sequel now

PRONGS-and-LILY-forever

I never read fics that are only 1 chapter long unless someone suggests them. There are so many HORRIBLE one-shots out there.

Yay! Me am a lucky ducky! xD

"And then they smushed their lips together more…and here’s Dan with the weather…Oh, I think they’re done."

I loved that line. It made me laugh. :D

Hehe, it was funny. ^^
But I do feel something was missing. *contempates*
Maybe it was because the story was rather short?
I don't know.
But I did think that some parts could be told in better detail.
And no, I did not mean the snogging. xP

P.S. If the criticism seems harsh, blame nerd camp. We had to provide constructive criticism for EVERY single essay EVERYBODY wrote. -_- (Hyphen, underscore, hyphen! lol)

P.P.S. When a man and a man and a man love each other very much, they engage in intense physical attraction! xD

loved it!

This story is really sweet. I would love it if you would continue. The ending sentences are a really good idea, kudos for thinking of taking them and for the fluff. You should go into more detail w/ the dead historical figures, that was funny. By the way, what does !1!!1!1eleven mean? Have a nice day!
~Minerva McGonagall Rox

I reslly like this story, the way they're all happy and whatnots. Its also kinds humorous, which is always great.
And since you want helpful reviews, I'll suggest for the sequel (which I hope will happen) everybody watching the kids? Well, I guess they wouldn't really be kids anymore... But you get what I mean.