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JovianJeff 2008-02-21 ch 4,	abuseI loved how this chapter showed the best and worse of Jack O'Neill. He is the kind of man you want defending you, at the same time he's flawed, he has prejudices and they aren't nice ones (not that any prejudice could be called nice). I loved how Jonathan told him off, defended his son, and how what could have been an ugly scene was turned around as Jack was reminded of his own. Not many authors I've seen ever do this, present the best and worse of Jack O'Neill, nor have ever done so well at it. Not that this chapter was all about Jack, it just stood out the most. Bravo dear sir, bravo!
Jusmine 2008-02-12 ch 4,	abuseAwesome story! My only complaint is that most of the time you don't seem to know where the question mark key is. Ah well! Keep up the good work!
Harry2 2008-02-12 ch 4,	abuseWell Mr. President, the reason you weren't informed was due to the fact that people in this area keep things like that UNDER WRAPS! And I wonder what Luthor has in mind for this strike against Metroplex?
Harry2 2007-12-28 ch 3,	abuseI remember Tripticon from both the TV series and from the Comic Books. He was the Decepticons equivalent of Metroplex and a tough fighter in his own right! No wonder the Decepticreeps wanted Clark! He could fuel that monster for a LONG TIME!
Kaoz 2007-12-26 ch 1,	abusethis is very interesting how ever- Reviled - –verb (used with object) 1. to assail with contemptuous or opprobrious language; address or speak of abusively. –verb (used without object) 2. to speak abusively. I'm sure you meant to say Revealed - 1. To make known (something concealed or secret): revealed a confidence. 2. To bring to view; show. There were other typos but not enough for me to pass up a good fic. Just check your spelling and grammar before you post or have your Beta do it.
JovianJeff 2007-12-26 ch 3,	abuseMagnificient! The continued seameless seeming intergration of the shows demonstrates a good handle of each and thought of how they would interact. Which I know sounds like I'm repeating myself, but not every author gets the trick of it and just slams together settings without thinking out all the ramifications. This chapter's meeting with Chloe and Jack was great, I could practically hear Jack's responses in his tone of voice from the show. Good escalation of the threat. Looking forward to next chapter.
Spidey2 2007-11-02 ch 2,	abusewow! what an awesome start! keep going! loved it! loved the multiple croosover idea! very intriguing...
Harry2 2007-11-02 ch 2,	abuseSounds like their is some major confusion on the parts of both the Autobots and President O'Neill over who is leading the Decepticons. Is it truly Starscream, or just someone using his name? I look forward to finding out in the next chapter, as well as what the Decipticreeps plan to do to Clark.
Harry2 2007-10-05 ch 1,	abuseI have to admit, I've never been a major fan of Smallville. But, I will say this: Anything that gets Kal-El upset, is about to wish it had not!
Allen Pitt 2007-10-05 ch 1,	abuseWeird crossover. I like it! Now have General Zod join up with the Decepticons... let's see, x-ray & heat vision will be useful here...one wonders if the Ancients ever met Kryptonians...will Clark keep his Fortress of Solitude secret...? etc..

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