 Alis rein silvervine 2008-10-18 . chapter 4i simply love this :D please update and keep up the good work! i think i have a nosebleed coming up...
keep up the good work! |
 Devatron2000 2008-07-02 . chapter 4great job I love it, they are my fav couple . |
 katiesquilts 2008-06-21 . chapter 4Woho. Who knew Byakuya liked the dirty talk? Though it does sorta sound like him! XD Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! |
 Sky Blue Baby 2008-06-15 . chapter 4Wow, it's what 4:00 in the morning here? And I'm up reading this because I couldn't stop. Great fic. I loved it. |
 Myrtillus 2008-02-09 . chapter 4Oh God you write some awesome text. You are the first writer to describe these lustfull scenes so exactly. And beside that you're an excellent writer. I could just praise you to heavens, but maybe I'll just add only one thing. You have really managed to keep their nature and actions etc quite truthful to the manga. And if you will, PLEASE continue this story more! Thank you |
 Aiyce 2008-02-07 . chapter 4Squee~ I love your story, your great at lemons. Do NOT dout your yaoi writing abilitys, my dear writer.
Keep writing, I love the story. |
 Ossifrage 2008-01-28 . chapter 4I need a cold shower...and I'm a girl.
Thank goodness that there's no defined semexuke, it's rather refreshing in the slash fandom. Plus, RenjixByakuya is my favorite Bleach pairing. I also love the dynamic between these two and how they actually aren't constantly in one emotion.
Very good, I hope to read more. |
 myownlife 2007-12-16 . chapter 4I rather enjoyed this chapter. I devilish part of Renji seamed to arouse not only Byakuya but the reader as well. The fact that Byakuya finally caved was for lack of a better word – hot.
Anyway I hope you update soon.
~myownlife |
 shogi 2007-12-02 . chapter 4Phew! *waves hand in front of face* That was HOT! Brilliantly done! Sorry I haven't reviewed much but I have read... actually I think I've read every one of your other stories! LOL And I loved them all!
One question: is this a continuing story? It doesn't say complete but that's really no indication, I've found. (Annoying as hell, that is) I really like this pairing (since it's not one I'm familiar with, I actually really like Renji/Ichigo and that was more how I came here) and EEK! Byakuya swearing and dirty talking! Priceless!
Great job and I look forward to more! |
 Torahiko 2007-11-27 . chapter 4-pants heavily- So. Incredibly. Hot. Especially Kuchiki-sama talking dirty and being rough. Please more? Have Byakuya make Renji speak very formally and politely, like a teacher/student scenario? Yes! Role play ;_; Pretty please?
I offer to you this innocent picture of Renji-kun and Kuchiki-sama I found, Day Eight, in hopes you'll bless us with another delicious chapter (I hope it shows ok).
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 Kazuya Arsashi008 2007-11-26 . chapter 4wow! I have to say that was one of the best ByaRen (lemony) fics I've ever read!! Amazing job!! ^o^ |
 Kazuya Arsashi008 2007-11-25 . chapter 1...now THAT's a well-made lemon!! (two thumbs up) ^o^ |
 Addictedreader09 2007-11-22 . chapter 4god they are the hottest couple in bleach!! nice story, |
 Mimi Misuzu 2007-11-20 . chapter 4WOW! Tee hee was reading this afterschool in an IT room XD had to keep under control |
 chojutsuka 2007-11-14 . chapter 4O.O Wow! Wipes drool off...
This story is so unbelieveably HOT. I never would have expected so much from a Byakuya/Renji coupling. This story rocks, and it goes on for a few more chapters just in case it didn't rock enough in the first chapter. Awesome! Saves to favorites... |