This is getting really interesting...

So far this seems very interesting

What an enjoyable story, however simple.
I've been looking for a Time After Time/Bttf story, I'm sad to say this is the only one I found.
Oh well, it'll have to suffice.

Darling story, I truly loved it. Keep it up =)

Just FYI, TIME AFTER TIME was written and directed by Nicholas Meyer.

Great story, Bttf 4! I feel sorry for Verne, though, as he actually found out how poor Linda died of cholera. I suppose that's going to be erased in 'A Girl From My Old Home', since in your poll you mentioned Verne and Marty going back to 1987 to get Linda some medicine. Actually, I think that going to the future is smarter, like Verne's time, 1997, or just 2017, but it's your story. So is Linda going to be Verne's wife in 2016? She's mentioned in Almost Christmas, I looked that up, but there is no mention of her being from the past. I guess that wouldn't be necessary, since the main subject was the timeloop.

Anyway, nice how you have finally managed to finish this great story. I hope you'll finish 'A Girl From My Old Home' soon, too, as I can't wait to see what happens to Verne, Marty, Seamus, and Linda!

Now this is a good ending to a good story.

Nice ending. It really tied up the loose ends well.

Now this is what i call good work.

I wonder how Marty'd do on air guitar. As good as he is on the elecric guitar?

Is Seamus skating, too? That's a cool mental picture.

This is looking good, this is FREAKIN' LOOKING GOOD!

I thought Herman and Carl were Bart Needles' sons and Billy's nephews. however at least this still works.

I love the story.

Oh boy well lets hope Marty doesn't have to face Royal in another gunfight at the okay corral. Nice chapter.

Oh, crap! BULLIES!