Great story!

Nice :) Glad she was able to see it, and move past it.

Wow, I really liked this! Great, great job! :)

Angelica

We all have a little bit of hypocrite in us, don't we?

Yay, that was a good bit of fiction

happy writing

That was remarkably... deep. Wow. It even gave me something to think about.

Your dictionary entries were cute. You've changed your writing style a little for this piece. It's good. Change is good. I like it.

Really good.

Almost a Warren/Layla-esque story. Well done.

Love your dialouge. The definition in there are perfect, too.

Well, keep up the good work!

Ember

Sweet. This was really good. I love how you put definitions of the words at the beginning of each segment. I also think your characterizations were great. I liked the ". . . dancing . . ." parts. :-P Very nice job. :-D

Interesting- I like the experimental qualities inherent in this work- the dictionary fragments before each chronological drabble were really effective.

Have you published any of your original stuff on If so, I'd love to read it

;)

Erisah

really good. i am not a big fan of sky high, but your story was really good.

"The grass is really greener on the other side of the fence. You ought to give it a shot." "Um, but I'm cool here." "But it really is greener! And you can convince the other cows to go over there too. See the pretty clover?" "Well, ok."

Later.

"Well, it's not really THAT much greener, but it's really too much trouble to admit I'm wrong now." *munch munch*

Victims of not wanting to admit we're wrong, aren't we all? Poor Layla, she can't win for losing. Good thing the gang has Warren there to set them straight (and even set himself straight!). A nice little one-shot. You think you're done with this fandom and it just keep sucking you back in...