 Renn Ireigh 9/2/01 . chapter 3Wow. |
 Chad Hianami Eleventh Digi-de 11/15/00 . chapter 1I like it. I am going to post a fic any day now. Well, nice job. |
 kale the Takarist 7/16/00 . chapter 1Writing tip...try splitting up everyone's dialogue into different paragraphs. Makes the text MUCH easier to read. But the plot development showed promise. |
 Ink Blot 7/15/00 . chapter 1 ! WHERE IS PART THREE? I WANT PART THREE!I WANT PART THREE I WANT PART THREE!I WANT PART THREE!I WANT PART THREE!I WANT PART THREE I WANT PART THREE!I WANT PART THREE!I WANT PART THREE!I WANT PART THREE I WANT PART THREE!I WANT PART THREE!I WANT PART THREE!I WANT PART THREE I WANT PART THREE!I WANT PART THREE! I think you know what to do, Vahn the Stampede. |
 Gabumonlover14 7/8/00 . chapter 1Please continue,I like this story! |
 Ink Blot Taiorahotmail.com 7/4/00 . chapter 1 That was pretty kewl. But where's part 2? I want I want part two! part two!I want part two!I want part two!I want I want part two! part two!I want part two!I want part two!I want I want partI want I want part two! part two!I want part two!I want part two! two! part two!I want part two!I want part two!I want I want part two! part two!I want part two!I want part two!I want I want part two! part two!I want part two!I want part two!I want I want partI want I want part two! part two!I want part two!I want part two! two! part two!I want part two!I want part two!I want I want part two! part two!I want part two!I want part two!I want I want part two! part two!I want part two!I want part two!I want I want partI want I want part two! part two!I want part two!I want part two! two! part two!I want part two!I want part two!I want I want part two! part two!I want part two!I want part two!I want I want part two! part two!I want part two!I want part two!I want I want partI want I want part two! part two!I I want I want part two! part two!I want part two!I want part two!I want I want part two! part two!I want part two!I want part two!I want I want partI want I want part two! part two!I want part two!I want part two! two! part two!I want part two!I want part two!I want I want part two! part two!I want part two!I want part two!I want I want part two! part two!I want part two!I want part two!I want I want partI want I want part two! part two!I want part two!I want part two! two! part two!I want part two!I want part two!want part two!I want part two! two! part two!I want part two!I want part two! o.O Sorry, i just had a liter of Moutain Dew and I'm kinda edgy. But write part two, c'mon please? ::Makes puupy dog eyes:: |
 Tenchi 6/30/00 . chapter 1 LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL! I loved it! Write More Write More Write More Write More Write More Write MOre Write MORe Write More WWWRRRIIITTTEEE MMMOOORRREEE! You should write MORE! |
 Li Kayun 6/29/00 . chapter 1isn't it weird...i used to have a fic with a humanoid digimon too, and the girl digimon's name was shinjima... |
 MellowMystyyou better know who I am 6/28/00 . chapter 1 You better get part two up real soon. Or me and Skye(the digime)gonna kick your ***. Actually, Shinji may be somewhat hard to defeat, but I think it's nothing I can't handle.*Smirk*
Good job with the fic. Just remember. The Skye is watching you. He he. |
 Jaded View 6/28/00 . chapter 1 This story kicked ass! You really rock at writing fics, you should definetly post more! Hey, cool name for the new person, Shinji! Shinji's a kool name! |