 kiasyn 2008-12-04 . chapter 3Yay! an awesome badass Kazuki Shikimori in a fanfic like no other... literally! XP
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 Mike Kromer 2008-10-29 . chapter 3Man that was good, keep up the good work, can't wait to see whatz next |
 Immatureboys 2008-08-16 . chapter 2Hey nice story, I'm making one too when Kazuki has backbone now, so he is strong in my story too, till then check it out sometime, its called Kazuki inner power |
 DragonMaster4381 2008-07-20 . chapter 3I actually don't usually read anything other than Naruto or Harry Potter stories...maybe a bit of Ranma. But you got an awesome story going here. Personally I like all the girls from the series, though Yuna wasn't my favorite she wasn't nearly as bad as a character like Sakura Haruno from the early Naruto series. To be honest I hope you make it a harem story...all four girls is still a small harem in comparison to what some do. If you don't want Yuna in it though, at least add Rin, she was one of my favorites next to Sayumi. |
 Tomahawk 3.0 2008-06-25 . chapter 1sorry, but i lost interest around the the third paragraph. |
 John Surber 2008-06-04 . chapter 3 Very nice. I enjoyed seeing Kazuki with a backbone, and being friends with a secondary character. It's interesting to see how things have changed so much, but remain so similar. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
I'd like to to see Kazuki paired with either Sayumi or Rim, but Sayumi is my first choice. |
 theotherdave 2008-05-24 . chapter 1Hmm a Kazuki with a spine. Very good. Will he have balls when it comesto the girls?? I like the harem idea because how can a guy say no to Sayumi,Kuriko, Rin and the hot school nurse? |
 Archer 2008-01-15 . chapter 3 Just 2 little things, first good story, although a good series, it is nearly impossiable to find any stories for it, secondly one of my favoret authors on this site, Kaze Dragon was a big fan of you storie Tulips and roses, he has been trying to find it for a while now, but since I dont have a profile, and cant get one, I have been unable to tell him you took it down, if you could let him know plz, looking foward to the next chapter, Ja Ne. |
 ShadowDragonGX 2008-01-03 . chapter 3Dude, I just got to seeing this series, but I'm liking it already and I gotta say, this Kazuki is kick ass, keep writing this story man. Maybe you can give him a few attack that are based on Ki too, like off of Ranma 1/2, Katchu Tenshin Amaguriken, Moko Takabishi, Shi Shi Hokodan, Bakusai Tenketsu, Umisenken,and many other Ki based attacks that are from that series. Well, I've said my peace, update soon man, ja ne. |
 Sentiment Remains 2007-12-01 . chapter 1I think this story is AWESOME! I like what you did to Kazuki's character (it's better than the anime but I still like the anime Kazuki too) It's actually been awhile to find a good Maburaho fanfic that kept me intrested WELL DONE!
OH YEA UPDATE SOON! |
 Adolthered 2007-11-11 . chapter 3GOD ! Only one word. Amazing ! Please update as soon as possible. I beg for your mercy. |
 Mo Eazy 2007-11-10 . chapter 3Thank you for feeding my addiction, I was having withdrawals I think. As with the previous two chapters, you once again prove to be the best writer I've seen on this site. I really liked how Kazuki stuck to his ideals even at the cost of his own arm. He didn't have to do it, the armor wasn't worth it. But his word was, and I like that about this Kazuki. The fact that he even used magic to save Sayumi was also a notable momen and I'm looking forward to seeing how he and everyone else reacts to that. I noticed how you fit Rin back into the storyline, not sure if that's a sign of things to come or not. I know you love the gal, but I think you should stick to your guns with a Kazuki/Kuriko/Sayumi triangle. Hope you start feeling better man, take care of yourself. |
 kamiii 2007-11-10 . chapter 3man, great chapter, that was crazy how he punched through the barrier like that, woo, cant wait for the next chapter of this story, its great |
 aznblackhowling 2007-11-08 . chapter 2This is really good. I hope you will continue updating this. And maybe a bit more often |
 MadHat886 2007-11-06 . chapter 2good fic continue it |
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