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| Aphina 2008-04-06 ch 16,  | abuseGood to see you back again. I loved the fact George finally admitted she had a problem being married. I love the cutescenes with Adrian. Danny's tatoo was a welcome surpise and Ruben was a darling, |
| Soccer-Bitch 2008-04-05 ch 16, | abusegreat chapter! i loved it. can't wait for more! |
| Aphina 2008-03-07 ch 15, | abuseI don;t thenk George wants to get married! lol I can't wait to see your next chapters! And what idea did Danny have. It's great to see Shldon lose his tempr and then hey make upat the end |
| Aphina 2008-03-07 ch 14, | abuseI feel so badfor the two of them! he shuld have told her and I can't believe that Linds did tell her!lol Rolling my eyes at Linds, the thing with George and Flack in the car was hot and I tink it's realistc that she'd get jealious. |
| Aphina 2008-03-07 ch 13, | abuseLmaio i like the litte Danny and Don moments and the way they talk about their gfs. "Bros before ho" lol. I was nice to see Don standing up to George's parents and I feel bead for Seldon and IZZY |
| Aphina 2008-03-07 ch 12, | abuseHey, is good to see you back I missed hearing abut the antics of these guys! Ilike the fact that Danyn eventually worked out how Linds felt. (sorry is early morning and I'm illiterate) I love the realism of the argument Danny and V had. i love the way her and Don fight sometiems. You keep constantly reminding us about Mac and Stella! |
| Soccer-Bitch 2008-03-06 ch 15, | abusegreat chapters. can't wait for the next ones! ^_^ |
| Aphina 2007-12-16 ch 11, | abuseHey. I could see why Feorge was mad I would have been, but it was really sweet to see them making up here, lmao frustrated Don. The quiz thing ws really humerious. I love the way you kept this chapter upbeat and I am interested in what Linds will do. |
| Aphina 2007-12-16 ch 10, | abuselol Its hectic as hell for everyone this time of year. Glad to see a few new chapters from you tho. The way you painted Mac and Stella's realtioship was very honest. I's great the way you writ them in this situation. I like the way it's all coming to a head. Ronnie's reaction was spot on for her charachter and it's lovely to see things have simmered down between George and Flack. |
| Soccer-Bitch 2007-12-13 ch 11, | abusegreat chapter. i loved it. can't wait for more! ^_^ |
| Soccer-Bitch 2007-12-13 ch 10, | abusegreat chapter! can't wait to see what happens next |
| crank 2007-11-30 ch 9, anon. | abuseHAha, i really liked the drunken guys night. they're so cute, all troubled about their women. |
| Sweetie 2007-11-23 ch 9, anon. | abuseIsn't Rosetta Caminetti the name of the character in 'Neighbours'? |
| Soccer-Bitch 2007-11-22 ch 9, | abusegreat chapter. really liked it. can't wait for more. |
| Aphina 2007-11-20 ch 8, | abuseHey I loved this chapter, It wwas nice to see, George being a bit more enthusiatic about the wedding. I wanan see where your going with the Stella and Mac conclusion, my heart broke when Mac told her he loved her. Can not wait to see what comes of Hawkes and Izzy |