 t a y e k i m 2009-07-23 . chapter 5This broke my heart to pieces, itty bitty pieces. So many--too many--to count. Itachi and his f*cked-up-ness. Grr... |
 Kurai's Calisto 2007-11-27 . chapter 5Aw, the ending was so nice. I love this story, and I hope you update soon :)
Love Kurai |
 shadowphoenix143 2007-11-05 . chapter 5Well the beginning was really messed up but I forgive you because you ended it on a happy note. Your writing was great as usual! :)
Hope you write another story soon! I look forward to it. |
 shadowphoenix143 2007-10-28 . chapter 4OMG poor Sasuke! I hope Naruto can save him, Sasuke has already suffered so much. Have I mentioned that I hate cliff hangers! :)
This chapter is very intense and REALLY well written. As always. Update soon ok? I really love your story! |
 shadowphoenix143 2007-10-14 . chapter 3ohh, I loved this chapter! It made feel so happy that they are going to do this together and that Sasuke is finally letting Naruto in. The love scene between them was beautiful and very well written. And Sasuke laughed! More then once! :)
That makes me very happy, I really really like your story. |
 MickeyLuv 2007-10-14 . chapter 3I did like that last comment lol ^.^ it is intresting so far |
 shadowphoenix143 2007-10-09 . chapter 1This story seems really good so far, are you going to add more or is it a one shot? You should add more. The only mistakes I saw were in the same sentence. 'They started at each other each appraising the differences three years had made in the other.'
It said 4 years had passed and I believe you ment stared at each other. Other then those very tiny mistakes you wrote REALLY well. I hope you decide to add more. I will add the story to my story alert list in case you do. Thanks for sharing. :) |
 sasuke-luvs-naruto 2007-10-05 . chapter 1this is really good update soon plz! |
 Taiga the tiger demon 2007-10-05 . chapter 1dude that was so cool! I like how you made sasuke so emotinal all the fics portray him as a ruthless bastard its super good update!! |