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memily
2008-06-03
ch 7,
abusewait i dont get it what happened
000kayko000
2008-01-31
ch 7,
abuseI really loved this story, it was so cute.
ponyrox2014
2008-01-21
ch 7, anon.
abusewow
this was cute
i've never found a story like this so i was thinking of writing one, but you've put my mind at rest a little
keep writing!
xKristinax
2007-12-31
ch 7,
abuseBRAVO!! A little short for such a good story, but I'll take it.
hp-gw4e
2007-11-19
ch 7,
abusegreat story, well thought out and written! - I like the ending, a nice surprise!
Thanks for posting it!
No name
2007-11-07
ch 7, anon.
abuseomg, love it!
One thing wrong though...James doesn't have Harry's eyes. It states in the last book that Albus is the only one with Harry's eyes.
idunnomore
2007-11-05
ch 6,
abuseRon is such a dork. I like it.
dancegirl01mom
2007-11-04
ch 6,
abusesweet - and I love the ending!
snaplappl21
2007-11-04
ch 7,
abuseThat was really cute, I liked it :)
NikiRadcliffe
2007-11-04
ch 7,
abuseloved it!
kaitlyn
2007-11-04
ch 7, anon.
abuseit was really cute. i loved the entire thing. i thought it would happen exactly like that. good job!
less than four
2007-11-04
ch 7, anon.
abuseThose were so cute! Though, personally, I think the 19 years later should've beena real chapter. XP
grayx3eyedsoul
2007-11-04
ch 6,
abuse“Hermione, when do you think we can get one of these?”

Ronald!

lol
kaypgirl
2007-11-04
ch 3,
abusePretty good story, though Ron was never quidditch captain, Harry was.
whimsy007
2007-11-03
ch 2,
abuseA minor correction. You wrote "Truthfully, he was happy for his friends, even if they did pick an inopportune moment for their first kiss." However their first kiss occurred during the battle of Hogwarts just after Ron and Hermione came back from the Chamber of Secrets.
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