HAHAA! Wow, that was really well done :D

There gunna be an "after mission de-brief" or something? 'Cause I think there should be... kinda Harry's reaction to being saved, or Mai's reaction to Stupid/Heroic Harry :D

gd fic

I love this fic. You did a really great job writing Mai and drugged/sleepy Harry.

Excellent. I really like your writing style. The quote "One foot in stupid, one foot in heroic" is particularly apt.