...Such a unique twist to Chicago! I liked it very much!

I don't know what it is. But Mona and June just catch my interest all the time. Along with Liz. Nice stories by the way.

Good job.

MissBrown

Hey there! I'm so sorry I took so long to comment how I loved this one. I was without my computer for a long time so... But I'm here right? Loved, even though Mona it's like my least favorite :)

Oh, and thanks for your PM coz I didn't receive anything about your new story! Probably coz this sites sucks '

Anyway, I'm sad it's done but I'm glad it had a great piece in the end.

*run to read the new story. Roxie/Velma!*

Fantastic!

Wow. This was one AMAZING story. My favorite part, I have to admit, was the end line. 'They always ended at midnight.' You're really good at ending stories with that one dramatic line!

This was really great, and it's kind of sentimental knowing that this is the last one, but I know you'll be writing plenty more! You portrayed Mona very well, excellent job!