Like it :)
But just cuz I'm curious...will this have Zack/Aeris or Zack/Cloud? Cuz I lurve shonen-ai/yaoi and just wanna know.
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Nya, nice fic! Update soon, I still wana know what happens next, keep doing the good job and writing such a nice story. Pardon my typos, I write to fast, well cya around.

This is a really interesting fic! Please update! =]

here comes the review! Yes, I like this Zack survives story! Especially because Cloud gets to do something too! A story I was looking for! *_* thank you so much for writing it! Please continue, I really can't wait till the next chapter

Ah, if only it were true. If only Zack really didn't die. But, alas, almost all prequels of some kind of game ends sadly with a character death. But! I do like your version, very much! :D

Really good story, one of the best fanfics I have ever read and I have read alot. I keep thinking why the heck can't this be the end instead of Zack dieing. Update Soon please!

Good job so far! Keep up the good work! ^^

Great Story! I really wanna know whose gonna fall from the sky to the church, I really hope it's Cloud though. I want to whose better at swordplay (Cloud or Zack) since Cloud was injected with more Jenova cells than Zack.

Great story you got going here. I personaly would prefer to see Aerith remain alive, but thats just me. Looking forward to the next chapter.

o.o now you seriously got me sad for that guy Jessie just killed. (sniffles before blowing her nose) >.> I'm a sucker for minor characters that's not important. (shrugs) anyway! Loved how Zack is still alive and can't wait for Aeris to come out!

update soon plx very good fic

Perfectly narrated. Excellent characterization. Acceptable Chapter length. Really, nice work. The story, while not having an untouched base plot, is exceptionally portrayed and it gives the whole fic an incredibly high good quality. Definitely worth reading.

Regarding Pairings, I would say to keep it light. Perhaps by hinting towards the prospects of a relationship between the characters but never going down enough to kissing or even less smuttish appearances. Either way the choice is yours.

About Aerith, keep in mind that Zack is by far more stronger minded than Cloud. Jenova Cells barely had effect on him(as Hojo states in the reports) and I doubt Sephiroth would be capable of manipulating him as much as he did Cloud - therefore he would be quickier to realize if Sephiroth were to try to kill her and perhaps he would be able to stop him. That, of course, in the prospect that Zack is present during Aerith's death at the altar.

My fangirlish instincts bring forth torment with a certain couple of queries; The story will go on even until after AC and DoC? Or will it only reach the Original Game? Perhaps even further than both games? Now, I bring forth the bigger most tormenting query; Is there any possibility my Fangirlish desire to see Genesis will be satisfied? :D? *hinthint*?

Oh, and this fic certainly goes into my watch list. Perhaps, later on, into my faves. 8D

Ah so glad you decided to resume this work. The first two chapters were a total teaser when I read this last year and then it kinda just fell away. I'm really looking forward to reading it again! T_T

Awesome chapter! I can't wait for the next installment! Update soon!

WOOT! Good chapter, by the way, do you have a beta reader? I'm not an official beta reader because I haven't published enough stories, but I would be happy to beta for you if you want. :P